发信人: chive (鹊·烦心), 信区: ASCIIart
标 题: Re: 魅力ASCIIart-WEB方式 Iamppkl 作品回顾展
发信站: BBS 水木清华站 (Wed Dec 8 00:09:42 2004), 站内
天秤(Iamppkl@smth)
[creambottle的评论]
这副人物部分基本就是水瓶那副的翻版感觉
不过衣服上的处理 更前卫一些 露脐装呢~~!
衣服纹理和头发等细节的改变也很耐看 呵呵 :)
[flubber的评论]
水瓶,天蝎和天秤的姿态都十分类似
右腿伸直,左腿微弯,
可能作者觉得这个姿态最能表现曲线美吧。
但是在三幅作品中的衣纹处理都是不同的
水瓶mm衣服的款式和褶皱都比较简单,静态多一些,
天秤mm则衣褶丰富,能感到有风将裙子吹向后方
天蝎mm的群摆较大,风将裙摆吹向前方,显露的是腿后沿的曲线
类似的姿势,三幅的角度也略有不同
[lstar的评论]
整体不错,两只胳膊略微僵硬了
[flubber的评论]
手臂还行了,觉得更难受的是手像两个钩子
如果和其他的作品一样,手不要画那么具体就好了
[windream的评论]
如果你非要把他们看成钩子的话
[flubber的评论]
所以是可说可不说的小毛病
Sender: chive magpie worry, message area: ASCIIart
Title: Re: Charming ASCIIart WEB Way Iamppkl Works Retrospective Exhibition
Sending station: BBS Shuimu Tsinghua Station Wed Dec 8 00:09:42 2004, within the station
Libra Iamppkl@smth
[creambottle’s review]
This character part is basically a replica of the Aquarius character.
However, the treatment on the clothes is more avant-garde. What about the navel-baring clothes?
The changes in details such as clothing texture and hair are also very eye-catching haha:
[flubber's comment]
Aquarius, Scorpio and Libra have very similar postures
Right leg straight, left leg slightly bent
Maybe the author thinks this posture best expresses the beauty of curves.
However, the treatment of clothing patterns in the three works is different.
The style and pleats of Aquarius mm's clothes are relatively simple and more static.
Libra girls have rich pleats and can feel the wind blowing their skirts backwards.
The Scorpio girl has a larger hem. The wind blows the skirt forward, revealing the curve of the back edge of the leg.
Similar poses, the angles of the three pictures are slightly different.
[lstar's comment]
Overall good. Two arms are slightly stiff.
[flubber's comment]
My arms are fine. What makes me feel more uncomfortable is that my hands look like two hooks.
It would be nice if, like other works, the hand drawings were not so specific.
[windream's comment]
If you must think of them as hooks
[flubber's comment]
So it’s a small problem that can be said or not.