发信人: chive (鹊·烦心), 信区: ASCIIart
标 题: Re: 魅力ASCIIart-WEB方式 Iamppkl 作品回顾展
发信站: BBS 水木清华站 (Wed Dec 8 00:10:11 2004), 站内
天蝎(Iamppkl@smth)
[creambottle的评论]
和Iamppkl一直没什么太大的交往
要不我一定会建议这副人物头发颜色改成亮红的或者其他的
因为这样的头发做的很有野性感 但觉得金黄色更适合狮子座?
不过这个天蝎图是我唯一不太反感或者说很习惯那些字母当线条使用
唯一觉得不太习惯的是这副的配色觉得不太搭配 其他都很好
[lstar的评论]
如果不讲题目,蝎子很难直接认出来,主要是蝎子身体部分交待不清楚
[parr的评论]
脸也不是太清楚,埋在头发里
而且这个的嘴 和天秤的嘴的那个字符不太好,缩小屏幕后会歪到鼻子前面去
蝎子尾巴弯起的弧顶处的连接很好,几个大大小小的圆
即做出了弧度,和两边也没有断开感
Sender: chive magpie worry, message area: ASCIIart
Title: Re: Charming ASCIIart WEB Way Iamppkl Works Retrospective Exhibition
Sending station: BBS Shuimu Tsinghua Station Wed Dec 8 00:10:11 2004, within the station
Scorpio Iamppkl@smth
[creambottle’s review]
I haven’t had much contact with Iamppkl.
Otherwise, I would definitely suggest changing the hair color of this character to bright red or something else.
Because this kind of hair looks very wild, but do you think blonde is more suitable for Leo?
But this Scorpio picture is the only one that I don’t feel disgusted with or I’m very used to using those letters as lines.
The only thing I'm not used to is that the color scheme of this pair doesn't quite match. Everything else is good.
[lstar's comment]
Without explaining the title, it would be difficult to recognize the scorpion directly, mainly because the parts of the scorpion's body are unclear.
[parr's comment]
The face is not very clear, it is buried in the hair
Moreover, the character of this mouth and the mouth of Libra are not very good. When the screen is zoomed out, it will be tilted in front of the nose.
The curved top of the scorpion's tail is well connected with several large and small circles.
Even if the arc is made, there is no sense of disconnection on both sides.