发信人: wskaka (kaka3:运气也是实力的一种), 信区: ASCIIart
标 题: 【汇总】[线条作品]SummerのDream(转载)
发信站: 武汉白云黄鹤站 (2009年07月01日22:12:42 星期三), 站内信件
发信人: Orz (小鬼||除了自己谁都不拜)
发信站: 武汉白云黄鹤站 (2009年05月03日19:45:29 星期天)
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发信人: sure (我不會為你放棄世界 因為你就是我的世界)
发信站: 武汉白云黄鹤站 (2009年05月03日20:25:04 星期天)
作者说构图太满了,,我完全不觉得
我认为刚刚好。。
【 在 Orz (小鬼||除了自己谁都不拜) 的大作中提到: 】
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发信人: zwffy (雪|小宁)
发信站: 武汉白云黄鹤站 (2009年05月03日20:25:43 星期天)
元素太多了。。眼睛无处着眼。
【 在 sure (我不會為你放棄世界 因為你就是我的世界) 的大作中提到: 】
: 作者说构图太满了,,我完全不觉得
: 我认为刚刚好。。
: 【 在 Orz (小鬼||除了自己谁都不拜) 的大作中提到: 】
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发信人: sure (我不會為你放棄世界 因為你就是我的世界)
发信站: 武汉白云黄鹤站 (2009年05月03日20:27:22 星期天)
你是说没有突出重点吧,
如果远景暗色一下会不会好点?
【 在 zwffy (雪|小宁) 的大作中提到: 】
: 元素太多了。。眼睛无处着眼。
: 【 在 sure (我不會為你放棄世界 因為你就是我的世界) 的大作中提到: 】
: : 作者说构图太满了,,我完全不觉得
: : 我认为刚刚好。。
: : .................(以下省略)
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发信人: zwffy (雪|小宁)
发信站: 武汉白云黄鹤站 (2009年05月03日20:47:50 星期天)
这幅画有三个 层次。天上,地上以及中间的景色。
三个层次如果连接不好就容易凌乱。所以作者试图用带状的点圆将三个层次连接起来。但三
个层次太平行了,所以很难连接。也就是透视出了问题,三个部分应该占的比例有大小才好
连接。
ps.其实构图难就难在透视,几个层次之间的连接上。所以一个层次比较好处理(这也不一
定,除非能处理得特别的细致。)
【 在 sure (我不會為你放棄世界 因為你就是我的世界) 的大作中提到: 】
: 你是说没有突出重点吧,
: 如果远景暗色一下会不会好点?
: 【 在 zwffy (雪|小宁) 的大作中提到: 】
: : 元素太多了。。眼睛无处着眼。
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发信人: zycw (淑女也疯狂)
发信站: 武汉白云黄鹤站 (2009年05月03日22:14:40 星期天)
衣服的线条感觉稍微有点生硬^^
【 在 Orz (小鬼||除了自己谁都不拜) 的大作中提到: 】
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Sender: wskaka kaka3: Luck is also a kind of strength, message area: ASCIIart
Title: Summary [Line Works]SummerのDream Reprinted
Sending station: Wuhan Baiyun Huanghe Station July 1, 2009 22:12:42 Wednesday, station mail
Sender: Orz, kid, I don’t worship anyone but myself.
Sending station: Wuhan Baiyun Huanghe Station May 03, 2009 19:45:29 Sunday
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Sender: sure I will not give up the world for you because you are my world
Sending station: Wuhan Baiyun Huanghe Station May 03, 2009 20:25:04 Sunday
The author said the composition is too full. I don’t think so at all.
I think it's just right
It is mentioned in the masterpiece of Orz the kid who doesn’t worship anyone but himself:
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Sender: zwffy Xue Xiaoning
Sending station: Wuhan Baiyun Huanghe Station May 03, 2009 20:25:43 Sunday
There are so many elements that the eyes have nowhere to focus.
In the masterpiece "sure I won't give up the world for you because you are my world" it is mentioned:
: The author said the composition is too full. I don’t think so at all.
: I think it’s just right
: Mentioned in the masterpiece of Orz the kid who doesn’t worship anyone but himself:
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Sender: sure I will not give up the world for you because you are my world
Sending station: Wuhan Baiyun Huanghe Station May 03, 2009 20:27:22 Sunday
Are you saying you didn't highlight the key points?
Would it be better if the distant view was darkened?
Mentioned in zwffy Xue Xiaoning’s masterpiece:
: There are too many elements and the eyes have nowhere to focus.
: Mentioned in the masterpiece "Sure I Will Not Give Up the World for You Because You Are My World":
: : The author said the composition is too full. I don’t think so at all.
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Sender: zwffy Xue Xiaoning
Sending station: Wuhan Baiyun Huanghe Station May 03, 2009 20:47:50 Sunday
This painting has three levels: the sky, the earth, and the scenery in between.
If the three levels are not well connected, it will be messy, so the author tried to use strip-shaped dot circles to connect the three levels, but the three levels
The two levels are too parallel, so it is difficult to connect, which means there is a problem with perspective. The proportions of the three parts should be equal to each other.
connect
ps. In fact, the difficulty in composition lies in perspective and the connection between several levels, so one level is easier to handle and this is not the same.
Unless it can be handled very carefully
In the masterpiece "sure I won't give up the world for you because you are my world" it is mentioned:
: You mean you didn’t highlight the key points?
: Would it be better if the distant view was darkened?
: Mentioned in zwffy Xue Xiaoning’s masterpiece:
: : There are too many elements and the eyes have nowhere to focus.
Sender: zycw Ladies are also crazy
Sending station: Wuhan Baiyun Huanghe Station May 03, 2009 22:14:40 Sunday
The lines of the clothes feel a little stiff^^
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