发信人: linzhihuan (BigHuan|卡尔马克思), 信区: ANSI
标 题: 点评 for downye by onlyone@BDWM
发信站: 日月光华 (2009年05月03日23:50:09 星期天), 站内信件
其实不知道要写什么@.@,因为小铛确实已经是非常熟了,而且大部分的作品我也
看过还有改过的....总体说来呢,铛算是进步非常神速的新人,如果从去年5.12时
期第一幅作品<光的方向>出道来看,不到一年的时间已经成为未名美工主力,实在
是可喜可敬。而且就算是第一幅作品,<光的方向>已经展现出优秀的构图实力和细
节字符处理能力,相比自己的处女作,呃....
下面具体说说我对小铛的一些看法。我觉得小铛还是适合处理比较飘逸的构图,比
如说<花下候良人>、<Blessing>这样的画面,不需要画的太满,也不用注重细节,
主要是画出那种意境;相对的工笔风格可能还是不太适合小铛。小铛的风格是比较
多变的,从这次参展的作品中已经可以体会到,我觉得这样是好事,毕竟拘泥于风
格也是走向ANSI死亡的一种途径= =....小铛作品的另一个特点是人物画居多,其
实我很期待伊的静物画,效果肯定很好对不对,不知道有没有这个兴趣,另外我也
很期待小铛的色块画
其实可以冒昧的给小铛一些建议,我觉得在构图方面其实你是完全ok的,你可以在
边缘点缀方面多下功夫,细节的方面,如果实在处理不好的时候,不必强求字符,
建议学一下乌梅前辈的虚笔
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Sender: linzhihuan BigHuan Karl Marx, message area: ANSI
Title: Review for downye by onlyone@BDWM
Sending station: Sun and Moon Guanghua May 03, 2009 23:50:09 Sunday, in-site mail
Actually I don’t know what to write@.@ because Xiaodang is indeed very familiar with it and I also know most of the works
I've seen it and I've corrected it... Generally speaking, Dang is a newcomer who has made rapid progress. If you look at it from 5.12 last year
Judging from the debut of the first work "The Direction of Light" in the issue, in less than a year, it has become the main artist of Weiming. It is really
It is gratifying and admirable. Even the first work "Direction of Light" has already shown excellent composition and detail.
Compared with my debut work, the character processing ability is uh...
Let’s talk about some of my views on Xiaodang in detail. I think Xiaodang is still suitable for handling more elegant compositions.
For example, for scenes like <Blessing> and <Blessing>, there is no need to paint too full a picture, and there is no need to pay attention to details.
The main thing is to draw that kind of artistic conception. The relatively fine brushwork style may not be suitable for Xiaodang. Xiaodang’s style is more
You can already feel the changeable nature from the works exhibited this time. I think this is a good thing. After all, we stick to the style.
Style is also a way to the death of ANSI.... Another characteristic of Xiaodang's works is that most of them are portraits.
Actually, I’m really looking forward to Yi’s still life paintings. The effect must be very good, right? I don’t know if you are interested in it. Also, I also
I’m really looking forward to Xiaodang’s color block paintings.
In fact, I can take the liberty to give Xiaodang some suggestions. I think you are completely OK in terms of composition. You can
Pay more attention to the edge embellishment. If you really can’t handle the details well, don’t force the characters.
I suggest you learn the virtual pen of Wu Mei-senpai.
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