发信人: wskaka (kaka3:运气也是实力的一种), 信区: ASCIIart
标 题: 【汇总】[线条作品]子龙(转载)
发信站: 武汉白云黄鹤站 (2009年06月22日12:10:59 星期一), 站内信件
发信人: Orz (小鬼||除了自己谁都不拜)
发信站: 武汉白云黄鹤站 (2009年05月03日19:46:45 星期天)
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│ ▏▏ / ̄
_ ╲\/ ╱ _
╱(__╱▏ )=㎜=(_ ╱\_)╲ _
/ ╱ _/ㄏ︽-—— 乁│/ ̄_╱ )╲
\ ╲/ ╱~∧~ ̄ ̄|\╱ ̄╱__> / ▏
/ 丿>>>/∧\巛巛\/ \/╱  ̄ ╱
\__/\/-/(O)\─\/\__╱ ╲__╱
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/__ __|╱ ╲╰─╮\∨/ ╭—╯ )/ ╱/ ╮)
╱╲ /╲_/ ▕乁_ ╰ \/ ╯ ㄏ│╱ ̄ _╱
_/ ╱ ╱\__/ │ ╭ ㄟ ㄏ ̄ ̄ ̄`V︵ ╱
——————— | / __ ︶、 ___ /(⌒)\
downye@bdwm \|ヽユ'> │∠`' ) )/ /
▕│  ̄ /  ̄ │ \╱
╲ / ╲/ _ _
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\╭'乁 ,-'/ ▕\__\ ─︿、 /╲ ▏/ ╱︶::︳
╲:::︶::/ \╲\╲ ︶ ╱ _丿/▏ \(o))▏
\::︵ :\_ \ ╲ ╲ ╱|_╱ ╱乁へ___,ーㄏ::_/:\
│(o)_::乁__へㄏ▏亅_ `﹀ˊ ╱ /︹ ︹ ︹ /::╱_::┃
/:::_╱::╱︹ ︹ _╲\- -╱/ ╱:::︺::︺::<:::╲_>:/
\:╱╱):/┃::︺::︺ \ \▏││ /:⿻:::⿻:::⿻:╲::::: ╲
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发信人: sure (我不會為你放棄世界 因為你就是我的世界)
发信站: 武汉白云黄鹤站 (2009年05月03日20:34:31 星期天)
对于线条画来说,貌似比例不太好,头画的太大了
【 在 Orz (小鬼||除了自己谁都不拜) 的大作中提到: 】
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: \ ╲/ ╱~∧~ ̄ ̄|\╱ ̄╱__> / ▏
: / 丿>>>/∧\巛巛\/ \/╱  ̄ ╱
: \__/\/-/(O)\─\/\__╱ ╲__╱
: __╱▏ |\ /︵::::\ || /:::::︵╲ " |_∧
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发信人: zycw (淑女也疯狂)
发信站: 武汉白云黄鹤站 (2009年05月03日22:20:05 星期天)
感觉头盔画的有些紧(是说左右的宽度),
另外眼睛画的略有不足
明显画的是偏侧的脸型
鼻梁线应该是更贴近左侧眼睛,而非紧挨右侧眼睛
【 在 Orz (小鬼||除了自己谁都不拜) 的大作中提到: 】
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: \ ╲/ ╱~∧~ ̄ ̄|\╱ ̄╱__> / ▏
: / 丿>>>/∧\巛巛\/ \/╱  ̄ ╱
: \__/\/-/(O)\─\/\__╱ ╲__╱
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发信人: sure (我不會為你放棄世界 因為你就是我的世界)
发信站: 武汉白云黄鹤站 (2009年05月03日22:24:01 星期天)
好像眼神是侧脸的眼神。。
【 在 zycw (淑女也疯狂) 的大作中提到: 】
: 感觉头盔画的有些紧(是说左右的宽度),
: 另外眼睛画的略有不足
: 明显画的是偏侧的脸型
: 鼻梁线应该是更贴近左侧眼睛,而非紧挨右侧眼睛
: 【 在 Orz (小鬼||除了自己谁都不拜) 的大作中提到: 】
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: : ㄟ\_ __╱ ㄕ
: : │ ▏▏ / ̄
: : _ ╲\/ ╱ _
: : ╱(__╱▏ )=㎜=(_ ╱\_)╲ _
: .................(以下省略)
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发信人: zycw (淑女也疯狂)
发信站: 武汉白云黄鹤站 (2009年05月04日19:55:38 星期一)
我是说以我们的视角右边的眼睛和鼻梁的距离近了
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│ ╭ ㄟ ㄏ ̄ ̄ ̄`V︵ ╱ │ ╭ ㄟ﹍ㄏ ▂▁_`V︵ ╱
| / __ ︶、 ___ /(⌒)\ | / __ 、 ___ ̄/(⌒)\
\|ヽユ'> │∠`' ) )/ / \|ヽユ'>│ ∠`' ) )/ /
▕│  ̄ /  ̄ │ \╱ ▕│  ̄ /  ̄ │ \╱
╲ / ╲/ _ ╲ / ╲/_
\ ˋ __\ ╲ \ ˋ __\ ╲
▕\__\ ─︿、 /╲ ▏/ ▕\__\ ─︿ /╲ ▏/
\╲\╲ ︶ ╱ _丿/▏ \╲\╲ ︶ ╱ _丿/▏
\ ╲ ╲ ╱|_╱ ╱乁へ_ \ ╲ ╲ ╱|_╱ ╱乁へ_
【 在 sure (我不會為你放棄世界 因為你就是我的世界) 的大作中提到: 】
: 好像眼神是侧脸的眼神。。
: 【 在 zycw (淑女也疯狂) 的大作中提到: 】
: : 感觉头盔画的有些紧(是说左右的宽度),
: : 另外眼睛画的略有不足
: : 明显画的是偏侧的脸型
: : 鼻梁线应该是更贴近左侧眼睛,而非紧挨右侧眼睛
: : .................(以下省略)
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发信人: sure (我不會為你放棄世界 因為你就是我的世界)
发信站: 武汉白云黄鹤站 (2009年05月04日19:58:20 星期一)
真的是没注意到这个细节,,跟上次在水木发际线问题一样(我把发际线画高了,不符合人
的比例
【 在 zycw (淑女也疯狂) 的大作中提到: 】
: 我是说以我们的视角右边的眼睛和鼻梁的距离近了
: ↓↓
: │ ╭ ㄟ ㄏ ̄ ̄ ̄`V︵ ╱ │ ╭ ㄟ﹍ㄏ ▂▁_`V︵ ╱
: | / __ ︶、 ___ /(⌒)\ | / __ 、 ___ ̄/(⌒)\
: \|ヽユ'> │∠`' ) )/ / \|ヽユ'>│ ∠`' ) )/ /
: ▕│  ̄ /  ̄ │ \╱ ▕│  ̄ /  ̄ │ \╱
: ╲ / ╲/ _ ╲ / ╲/_
: \ ˋ __\ ╲ \ ˋ __\ ╲
: ▕\__\ ─︿、 /╲ ▏/ ▕\__\ ─︿ /╲ ▏/
: \╲\╲ ︶ ╱ _丿/▏ \╲\╲ ︶ ╱ _丿/▏
: .................(以下省略)
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Sender: wskaka kaka3: Luck is also a kind of strength, message area: ASCIIart
Title: Summary [Line Works] Reprinted by Zilong
Sending station: Wuhan Baiyun Huanghe Station June 22, 2009 12:10:59 Monday, station letter
Sender: Orz, kid, I don’t worship anyone but myself.
Sending station: Wuhan Baiyun Huanghe Station May 03, 2009 19:46:45 Sunday
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Sender: sure I will not give up the world for you because you are my world
Sending station: Wuhan Baiyun Huanghe Station May 03, 2009 20:34:31 Sunday
For line drawing, it seems that the proportions are not very good and the head is too big.
It is mentioned in the masterpiece of Orz the kid who doesn’t worship anyone but himself:
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Sender: zycw Ladies are also crazy
Sending station: Wuhan Baiyun Huanghe Station May 03, 2009 22:20:05 Sunday
I feel like the helmet is a little tight. I mean the width on the left and right.
In addition, the eyes are slightly lacking in painting.
It is obvious that the face is drawn on one side
The nose bridge line should be closer to the left eye than to the right eye
It is mentioned in the masterpiece of Orz the kid who doesn’t worship anyone but himself:
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Sender: sure I will not give up the world for you because you are my world
Sending station: Wuhan Baiyun Huanghe Station May 03, 2009 22:24:01 Sunday
It’s like the eyes are sideways
Mentioned in zycw Ladies Are Crazy's masterpiece:
: I feel that the helmet is a little tight. I mean the width on the left and right.
: In addition, the eyes are slightly insufficiently drawn.
: It is obvious that the face is drawn on one side
: The nose bridge line should be closer to the left eye than to the right eye
: Mentioned in the masterpiece of Orz the kid who doesn’t worship anyone but himself:
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Sender: zycw Ladies are also crazy
Sending station: Wuhan Baiyun Huanghe Station May 4, 2009 19:55:38 Monday
I mean, from our perspective, the distance between the right eye and the bridge of the nose is closer.
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乁へ 乁へ
In the masterpiece "sure I won't give up the world for you because you are my world" it is mentioned:
: It seems like the eyes are sideways glances
: Mentioned in zycw Ladies Are Crazy's masterpiece:
: : I feel that the helmet is a little tight. I mean the width on the left and right.
: : In addition, the eyes are slightly lacking in painting.
: : It is obvious that the face is drawn on one side
: : The nose bridge line should be closer to the left eye than to the right eye
: : ............. omitted below
Sender: sure I will not give up the world for you because you are my world
Sending station: Wuhan Baiyun Huanghe Station May 04, 2009 19:58:20 Monday
I really didn't notice this detail. It's the same as the hairline problem in Shuimu last time. I drew the hairline high, which is not in line with people.
proportion
Mentioned in zycw Ladies Are Crazy's masterpiece:
: I mean, from our perspective, the distance between the right eye and the bridge of the nose is closer.
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