发信人: onlyone (戚夜梓|真是很讽刺), 信区: ASCIIArt
标 题: Re: [作者感言]saber
发信站: 北大未名站 (2009年05月15日03:57:32 星期五), 转信
其实这幅图在我看来还真的是有一些问题的
那既然卡卡殿不介意,我就真拍下去了哦XD(反正这次联展我就没做过好人....)
首先很致命的一点,头发的颜色使用不当
不说别的,纵观所有名家作品我发现,但凡是要对黄发进行刻画
基本上都只是用三种颜色:黄(废话)、白、黑,当然还有部分亮黄
也就是说,用纯黑色来担当阴影部分而不应该用红色
事实上这是有色彩学的道理在里面的
如果使用黄红的组合来刻画头发,一般是红色做主色部分
黄色做亮色部分,借以刻画红发,这样的例子也有不少
而如果黄色本身就成为主要色调,搭上少量的红色做暗部
由于红黄之间的色差本身就不大,给人的错觉是整体比较亮
而且亮处比较多,这样是不符合正常观感的
用黑色的话,在这方面可能会弥补一些,黄发确实不好画,cmft
然后再一个就是衣服的颜色,那些高亮白的色块确实突兀了
再加上高亮灰....><...事实上如果是白衣的话,按照线条的逻辑
把衣褶用黑色勾出,也许就足够了吧
最后是眼睛,我觉得这幅图的眼睛卡卡处理的随便了
没有圣斗士系列的细致了,至少比星矢一图相差甚远
当然以上都是胡说八道,我自己本身不会画色块
所以站的说话不腰疼,想到什么说什么,荒谬之处卡卡殿不必放在心上
Sender: onlyone Qi Yezi This is really ironic, message area: ASCIIArt
Title: Re: [Author's remarks] saber
Sending station: Peking University Weiming Station May 15, 2009 03:57:32 Friday, forwarded
Actually, in my opinion, there are some problems with this picture.
Well, since Kakadian doesn’t mind, I’ll really go ahead and take the photo. XD Anyway, I haven’t been a good person in this joint exhibition...
First of all, the fatal point is improper use of hair color.
If nothing else, looking at all the works of famous artists, I found that when it comes to depicting yellow hair,
Basically, they only use three colors: yellow, nonsense, white, black, and of course some bright yellow.
In other words, pure black should be used for shadows instead of red.
In fact, this is based on color science.
If a combination of yellow and red is used to depict hair, red is usually the main color.
Use yellow as the bright color to depict red hair. There are many examples of this.
And if yellow itself becomes the main color, add a small amount of red to make the dark parts
Since the color difference between red and yellow is not that big, it gives people the illusion that the whole thing is brighter.
And there are a lot of bright spots, which is inconsistent with the normal look and feel.
Using black might make up for this a bit. Yellow hair is really difficult to draw cmft
Then the other thing is the color of the clothes. Those high-gloss white color blocks are really abrupt.
Coupled with the high-gloss gray...><...In fact, if it is white, it will follow the logic of the lines.
Maybe it's enough to outline the pleats in black
Finally, the eyes. I think the eyes in this picture were handled casually.
It's not as detailed as the Saint Seiya series. At least it's far from Seiya's first picture.
Of course, the above is all nonsense. I can’t draw color blocks myself.
So you can stand and speak without pain in your back. Say whatever comes to mind. Don’t take the absurdity to heart.