发信人: freshtime (五一期间在深圳), 信区: ASCIIart
标 题: Re: 结语
发信站: 水木社区 (Fri May 9 21:57:05 2008), 站内
总体感觉:
不客气地说,还需要磨炼哦~
色块上,看得出来花了很多功夫
有的作品效果也非常的好
但是有的边缘就不太平滑,或者说以前不太平滑?
b2a是好东西,虽然出来的东西多有毛刺
但是能够很好的表现物品的框架结构和位置
多利用下咯
线条上,意境化的作品很有趣
具体化的作品可以用线条再大胆一点
比如美女1的手臂,还有雕磨的余地
不过自己能够画得快乐才是最重要的
不妨多借鉴下前辈们的作品?
加油!
我看好你哟~
Sender: freshtime in Shenzhen during May Day, letter area: ASCIIart
Title: Re: Conclusion
Sending site: Shuimu Community Fri May 9 21:57:05 2008 , within the site
overall feeling
To put it bluntly, I still need to practice.
It can be seen that a lot of effort was put into the color blocks.
Some works have very good effects
But some edges are not very smooth, or they were not smooth before.
b2a is a good thing, although the products that come out often have glitches.
But it can well express the frame structure and position of the object
Use it more
The artistic conception of lines is very interesting
Concrete works can use bolder lines
For example, Beauty 1’s arms still have room for carving.
But the most important thing is that you can draw happily
Let’s learn more from the works of our predecessors
come on
I'm optimistic about you