发信人: L4KevinX (十四||我又开始纠结了), 信区: ASCIIart
标 题: [合集] [线条作品]女人2
发信站: 水木社区 (Fri May 23 00:11:30 2008), 站内
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legendspirit (legendspirit) 于 (Fri May 9 22:00:30 2008) 提到:
这个mm我很喜欢左边的肩膀、腰已经臀部
主要问题是右臂和鞋有点僵硬
【 在 Daviddvd (BT...) 的大作中提到: 】
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Kieslowski (悲凉啊) 于 (Fri May 9 22:07:00 2008) 提到:
左肩感觉有点耸...
【 在 legendspirit (legendspirit) 的大作中提到: 】
: 这个mm我很喜欢左边的肩膀、腰已经臀部
: 主要问题是右臂和鞋有点僵硬
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legendspirit (legendspirit) 于 (Fri May 9 22:09:12 2008) 提到:
就是耸着啊,当你靠在一个比你的肘关节低的栏杆上时,肩膀可不是耸着的么
所以我才觉得那一笔很生动传神
【 在 Kieslowski (悲凉啊) 的大作中提到: 】
: 左肩感觉有点耸...
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Daviddvd (BT...) 于 (Fri May 9 22:09:34 2008) 提到:
其实也就腰臀感觉还可以……
【 在 Kieslowski (悲凉啊) 的大作中提到: 】
: 左肩感觉有点耸...
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BigHuan (BigHuan@RYGH) 于 (Fri May 9 22:10:26 2008) 提到:
我觉得最主要是鞋太简单了,肩膀相对还好
【 在 Kieslowski (悲凉啊) 的大作中提到: 】
: 左肩感觉有点耸...
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freshtime (五一期间在深圳) 于 (Fri May 9 22:10:39 2008) 提到:
嗯和我想法一样嘛
【 在 BigHuan (BigHuan@RYGH) 的大作中提到: 】
: 我觉得最主要是鞋太简单了,肩膀相对还好
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chive (晕~*.~~`') 于 (Fri May 9 22:24:36 2008) 提到:
恩,觉得现在的比起上面出色的线条来说稍微简单了一点,
加加工就更好了,
比如加个动作什么的。。=。=
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【 在 freshtime (五一期间在深圳) 的大作中提到: 】
: 嗯和我想法一样嘛
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Kieslowski (悲凉啊) 于 (Fri May 9 22:28:08 2008) 提到:
发两个修改版本,左边那个在光华已经发过了...
感觉耸肩的话整个人的重心就往右边去了...
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【 在 legendspirit (legendspirit) 的大作中提到: 】
: 就是耸着啊,当你靠在一个比你的肘关节低的栏杆上时,肩膀可不是耸着的么
: 所以我才觉得那一笔很生动传神
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legendspirit (legendspirit) 于 (Fri May 9 22:38:20 2008) 提到:
重心本来就应该在右边
按照我的理解,这个人的姿势不是完全正背对我们
而是有点侧,有点斜靠的感觉,从屁股那里可以看得出来
虽然改了以后人正常了一些,但是少了点那种随性的感觉。。。
【 在 Kieslowski (悲凉啊) 的大作中提到: 】
: 发两个修改版本,左边那个在光华已经发过了...
: 感觉耸肩的话整个人的重心就往右边去了...
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Kieslowski (悲凉啊) 于 (Fri May 9 22:45:10 2008) 提到:
呵呵,有道理。
【 在 legendspirit (legendspirit) 的大作中提到: 】
: 重心本来就应该在右边
: 按照我的理解,这个人的姿势不是完全正背对我们
: 而是有点侧,有点斜靠的感觉,从屁股那里可以看得出来
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Daviddvd (BT...) 于 (Fri May 9 22:47:23 2008) 提到:
第一稿画的时候
我记得好像是有参考图的
后来修改的时候
也找不到了不用了
到现在自己已经不知道到底想画什么姿势什么感觉了……
应该趁天气好去外面采风haha
【 在 legendspirit (legendspirit) 的大作中提到: 】
: 重心本来就应该在右边
: 按照我的理解,这个人的姿势不是完全正背对我们
: 而是有点侧,有点斜靠的感觉,从屁股那里可以看得出来
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BigHuan (BigHuan@RYGH) 于 (Fri May 9 23:00:09 2008) 提到:
大侠啊!!
【 在 chive (晕~*.~~`') 的大作中提到: 】
: 恩,觉得现在的比起上面出色的线条来说稍微简单了一点,
: 加加工就更好了,
: 比如加个动作什么的。。=。=
: ...................
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tRNA (Asciiart版 水木光华两站字符艺术联展) 于 (Sat May 10 12:43:43 2008) 提到:
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【 在 legendspirit (legendspirit) 的大作中提到: 】
: 这个mm我很喜欢左边的肩膀、腰已经臀部
: 主要问题是右臂和鞋有点僵硬
Sender: L4KevinX Fourteen I started to struggle again, message area: ASCIIart
Title: [Collection] [Line Works] Woman 2
Sending site: Shuimu Community Fri May 23 00:11:30 2008 , within the site
legendspirit legendspirit mentioned on Fri May 9 22:00:30 2008:
I like this mm very much, the shoulder on the left, the waist and the hip.
The main problem is that my right arm and shoe are a bit stiff
In the masterpiece of Daviddvd BT... mentioned:
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Kieslowski Sad on Fri May 9 22:07:00 2008 mentioned:
My left shoulder feels a bit hunched...
Mentioned in legendspirit legendspirit's masterpiece:
: I really like the left shoulder, waist and hip of this mm.
: The main problem is that my right arm and shoe are a bit stiff
legendspirit legendspirit mentioned on Fri May 9 22:09:12 2008:
It's just hunched. When you lean on a railing that's lower than your elbow, aren't your shoulders hunched?
That's why I think that stroke is very vivid and expressive
In Kieslowski's masterpiece Desolation it is mentioned:
: My left shoulder feels a little shrugged...
Daviddvd BT... mentioned on Fri May 9 22:09:34 2008:
Actually, my waist and hips just feel okay.
In Kieslowski's masterpiece Desolation it is mentioned:
: My left shoulder feels a little shrugged...
BigHuan BigHuan@RYGH mentioned on Fri May 9 22:10:26 2008:
I think the main thing is that the shoes are too simple and the shoulders are relatively good.
In Kieslowski's masterpiece Desolation it is mentioned:
: My left shoulder feels a little shrugged...
freshtime in Shenzhen during May Day mentioned on Fri May 9 22:10:39 2008:
Yeah, you have the same idea as me
Mentioned in BigHuan BigHuan@RYGH's masterpiece:
: I think the main thing is that the shoes are too simple and the shoulders are relatively good.
chive halo *. ' mentioned on Fri May 9 22:24:36 2008:
Well, I think the current one is a little simpler than the excellent lines above.
It would be better if it is processed
For example, add an action or something
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Mentioned in freshtime’s masterpiece in Shenzhen during the May Day period:
: Yeah, you have the same idea as me
Kieslowski Sad on Fri May 9 22:28:08 2008 mentioned:
Posting two modified versions. The one on the left has already been posted in Guanghua...
It feels like if you shrug your shoulders, your whole center of gravity will go to the right...
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Mentioned in legendspirit legendspirit's masterpiece:
: It means hunched. When you lean on a railing lower than your elbow joint, your shoulders are not hunched.
: That’s why I think that stroke is very vivid and expressive
legendspirit legendspirit mentioned on Fri May 9 22:38:20 2008:
The center of gravity should be on the right
According to my understanding, this person's posture is not completely facing away from us.
It's a bit sideways, a bit leaning, and you can see it from the buttocks.
Although after the change, I became a bit more normal, but I lost a bit of that casual feeling.
In Kieslowski's masterpiece Desolation it is mentioned:
: Posting two modified versions. The one on the left has already been posted in Guanghua...
: It feels like if you shrug your shoulders, your whole center of gravity will go to the right...
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Kieslowski Sad on Fri May 9 22:45:10 2008 mentioned:
Haha that makes sense
Mentioned in legendspirit legendspirit's masterpiece:
: The center of gravity should originally be on the right
: According to my understanding, this person’s posture is not completely facing away from us.
: It’s a bit sideways, a bit leaning, you can see it from the buttocks
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Daviddvd BT... mentioned on Fri May 9 22:47:23 2008:
When I was drawing the first draft
I remember there seemed to be a reference picture
When it was modified later
I can't find it either. No need.
Until now, I no longer know what posture or feeling I want to draw.
I should go outside to collect wind while the weather is nice haha
Mentioned in legendspirit legendspirit's masterpiece:
: The center of gravity should originally be on the right
: According to my understanding, this person’s posture is not completely facing away from us.
: It’s a bit sideways, a bit leaning, you can see it from the buttocks
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BigHuan BigHuan@RYGH mentioned on Fri May 9 23:00:09 2008:
Hero
Mentioned in chive halo *. ''s masterpiece:
: Well, I think the current one is a little simpler than the excellent lines above.
: It will be better if it is processed.
: For example, add an action or something
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tRNA Asciiart Edition Mizuki Guanghua Two Station Character Art Joint Exhibition on Sat May 10 12:43:43 2008 mentioned:
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Mentioned in legendspirit legendspirit's masterpiece:
: I really like the left shoulder, waist and hip of this mm.
: The main problem is that my right arm and shoe are a bit stiff