发信人: L4KevinX (十四||我又开始纠结了), 信区: ASCIIart
标 题: [合集] [线条作品]女人1
发信站: 水木社区 (Fri May 23 00:10:10 2008), 站内
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freshtime (五一期间在深圳) 于 (Fri May 9 21:26:11 2008) 提到:
动作和神态很赞
手的话可以修改下~
另外既然面部是侧影,不妨考虑使用白色的明暗度变化来表现面部的光影
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L4KevinX (十四|f姐说我也是囧星人) 于 (Fri May 9 21:44:58 2008) 提到:
啊
我还记得第一次看
还以为是fr。。。
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BigHuan (BigHuan@RYGH) 于 (Fri May 9 21:53:45 2008) 提到:
我的建议还是
。。。加个鼻子
【 在 freshtime (五一期间在深圳) 的大作中提到: 】
: 动作和神态很赞
: 手的话可以修改下~
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JuliaFrank (小卡那) 于 (Fri May 9 22:31:13 2008) 提到:
两只手臂长的高低好像有点问题
mm的右肩最上面的斜线改成横的会好一点^^
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BOneFiveER (茄|(ヲ(つ(ん(ㄅ) 于 (Sat May 10 06:23:42 2008) 提到:
女人我就不多说了....不会画人
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justify (杂杂) 于 (Sat May 10 09:55:52 2008) 提到:
胸部很传神啊。。
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Title: [Collection] [Line Works] Woman 1
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freshtime in Shenzhen during May Day mentioned on Fri May 9 21:26:11 2008:
The movements and expressions are great
If you have your hands on it, you can modify it.
In addition, since the face is in profile, you might as well consider using white shading changes to express the light and shadow on the face.
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L4KevinX Fourteen Sister F said that I am also a Jie star. On Fri May 9 21:44:58 2008 mentioned:
ah
I still remember the first time I watched it
Thought it was fr
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BigHuan BigHuan@RYGH mentioned on Fri May 9 21:53:45 2008:
My suggestion is still
add a nose
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: You can modify it if you have it by hand
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JuliaFrank Xiaocana mentioned on Fri May 9 22:31:13 2008:
There seems to be something wrong with the height of the two arms.
It would be better to change the diagonal line at the top of mm's right shoulder to a horizontal one^^
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BOneFiveER 素 ヲ つ ん ㄅ on Sat May 10 06:23:42 2008 mentioned:
I won’t say much about women…I can’t draw people.
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justify Zaza mentioned on Sat May 10 09:55:52 2008:
The breasts are very expressive
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