发信人: Allosaur (allo), 信区: ANSI
标 题: [线条作品]春之韵·黛玉葬花的作者感言
发信站: 日月光华 (2008年04月29日20:41:06 星期二), 站内信件
在asciiart欣赏保留区的作品时,发现很多前辈们画的不同版本的黛玉。以前我曾经手
画过一个很常见版本的黛玉葬花,于是就也想画出来。
画好贴到asciiart版后大家也给了很多宝贵的建议,受益非浅。
对于这幅画作,我个人比较满意的地方一是整幅画的构图,还有就是飘带的处理吧。
窃以为自己算是一个比较重视整体构图的人,但是细节经常抓不好,会遗漏一些东西。
对于复杂细致的飘带,如果用线条表达很可能会比较乱,换一种表达方式就稍微好些了
另外还有一点感触就是,这种偏“古风”的画作,经常需要用到一些日文符号,而自己
对于这些符号还不够熟悉,所以有些地方表达的有些生硬。
【 在 Allosaur (allo) 的大作中提到: 】
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: ╔╗╔═┉┅┈┄ ( """"-╮ ┄┈┅┉═╗╔╗
: ╚╬╬╗ ╰/ ︵ \ _,;\ 落 游 魂 花 ╔╬╬╝
: ╔╬╬╝ │╱ )/ _,.-"" ││ 絮 丝 消 谢 ╚╬╬╗
: ║╚╝ |) _ノ ,.-" │/ 轻 软 香 花 ╚╝║
: ┋ ╭╱_/-"" " 沾 系 断 飞 ┋
: ┇ ヾ\╱\╱ \ 扑 飘 有 飞 ┇
: ┊ _╮-"乁│ │ 绣 春 谁 满 ┊
: ┆ _.-ミ︿|/╲\\_ ト ▏ 帘 榭 怜 天 ┆
: ┆ │\_▕╱乀;./\ ╭. ┆
: .................(以下省略)
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※ 来源:·日月光华 bbs.fudan.edu.cn·[FROM: bbs.zixia.net]
Sender: Allosaur allo , Area: ANSI
Title: [Line Works] Rhythm of Spring Author's Remarks on Daiyu Burying Flowers
Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua Tuesday, April 29, 2008 20:41:06, site mail
When I was appreciating the works in the reserve area at asciiart, I found many different versions of Daiyu painted by my predecessors. I had painted them before.
I painted a very common version of Daiyu Burying Flowers, so I wanted to paint it too.
After I finished the drawing and posted it on the asciiart version, everyone also gave me a lot of valuable suggestions and I benefited a lot.
What I am personally quite satisfied with about this painting is the composition of the entire painting and the handling of the streamers.
I secretly think that I am a person who pays more attention to the overall composition, but I often fail to grasp the details and will miss some things.
For complex and detailed streamers, if you use lines to express them, it will probably be messy. It will be slightly better to use another way of expression.
Another feeling is that this kind of ancient-style paintings often need to use some Japanese symbols, and I
I'm not familiar with these symbols yet, so some of my expressions are a bit stiff.
In the masterpiece of Allosaur allo it is mentioned:
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: ,; wandering soul flower
:,. ""XuSiXie
: ノ,. "Light, soft, fragrant flower
: "" " Zhan Department Break Fly
: ヾ flutter, fly, fly
: "乁 embroidered spring who is full
: . ミ ト curtain pavilion pity day
: 乀;. .
: ............. omitted below
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