发信人: Allosaur (allo), 信区: ANSI
标 题: around的评价Re: [线条作品]秋之思·时尚
发信站: 日月光华 (2008年04月29日21:07:34 星期二), 站内信件
我的意见是:
1,这幅图的成败在于手的画法,象这样的一幅图,把手画好可以帮助你更好的表达意象,
而手的画法也是ascii画手们一直津津乐道的话题,所以恰恰在这个最重要的细节上不应该
马虎;
2,腿部粗细不一的问题只需要改动一个字符就够了;
3,这幅图最出采的地方恰恰是作者在腿部和手部的处理上没有按照传统弧线来作图,而且
总的来看没有造成线条混乱,这是一个很好的创新,所以这部分我的意见是不要修改;
4,看得出来作者在做这个图的时候对花了很大的努力,对各个部分都做了很仔细的推敲,
唯一要注意的是对整体平衡的把握,不应该出现腿部和手部粗细长短不一的问题。
5,参考下面修改的图。
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【 在 Allosaur (allo) 的大作中提到: 】
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啥时候可以改名字呢
※ 来源:·日月光华 bbs.fudan.edu.cn·[FROM: bbs.zixia.net]
Sender: Allosaur allo , Area: ANSI
Title: evaluation around Re: [Line Works] Autumn Thoughts Fashion
Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua Tuesday, April 29, 2008 21:07:34, site mail
My advice is
1 The success or failure of this picture lies in the way you draw your hands. In a picture like this, drawing your hands well can help you express your image better.
The drawing method of hands is also a topic that ASCII painters have always talked about, so it is precisely this most important detail that should not be
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2. The problem of different leg thicknesses only requires changing one character.
3 The most outstanding thing about this picture is that the author did not follow traditional arcs in the treatment of legs and hands.
Overall, it does not cause confusion in the lines. This is a good innovation, so my opinion is not to modify this part.
4 It can be seen that the author put a lot of effort into making this picture and carefully considered every part.
The only thing you need to pay attention to is the overall balance. There should be no problems with the thickness of the legs and hands being different.
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When can I change my name?
Source: Sun and Moon Guanghua bbs.fudan.edu.cn [FROM: bbs.zixia.net]