Sender: mote is poor, 1 US dollar a piece, 168, message area: ANSI Title: Re: I wrote a few words for the first time, please give me some advice. Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua Thursday, April 1, 2004 19:21:47 Thank you. So what about this? Mentioned in city's masterpiece: : The star of Zhizi seems to be lit in the wrong place... : mentioned in the masterpiece of mote who lost 1 dollar and 168: : : I have modified it a bit. Will it look better this way? Will it feel like superfluous? : : .. : : : : : : .. : : .. : : : : ............. omitted below The past is like smoke and a dream Time flies in the blink of an eye Who is waiting for whom, who is wasting time for whom It's still blurred in it till now Source: Sun and Moon Guanghua bbs.fudan.edu.cn HTTP [FROM: 10.85.45.115]