Sender: coollizard Ai Zai Yuan Qian @CSD Scale Demon, message area: ASCIIArt Title: Gemini Golden Cloth Revised draft and revision comments by flubber Sending site: Gulang Tingtao September 5, 2003 14:04:55 Friday, site mail Please do not reprint this article. The author's opinion. We apologize for any inconvenience caused: Mainly changed the face and four hands Your bigger problem is your arms. The arms in the original picture are in the shape of a vase. After I modified a hand for you last time, I wanted to remind you to pay attention to the curve. But you just changed the symmetrical hand accordingly But I didn’t see that the two green ones above are more problematic. Not only is it much shorter in proportion, the bottleneck curve is also gone. Fingers are a delicate job, so we have to ask for a detailed explanation. Just take a general look. Your original lower right hand is better and the movement is accurate. The upper right hand is blurry and uses too many unrealistic characters, making it difficult to understand. The upper right hand shape is more difficult to draw. I drew two separate ones on the right side. 2 is closer to the original picture. The little finger is bent, but it is not easy to see. So I changed it to the shape of 1 to make it easier to identify. I did not draw the left and right sides symmetrically. The original picture is also asymmetrical. Please carefully compare your arms with the picture you drew. ﹒ , {ヾ . ⌒ ⌒ ⌒ ⌒ .⌒ , {巛' ' <>四, ヘ マ ソ <ニ ^ ^ ﹨ ﹒ , >" ^< ⌒ ヘ .⌒. ⌒ ﹨ ⌒< >⌒ .⌒ 1 乀 ノ ﹨ } , 'y' ' .⌒ 2 coollizard@XMU flubber@SMTH