发信人: legendspirit (0127·卿云长系·天涯若比邻), 信区: ANSI
标 题: 迷道乱谈——评“小镇风光” by wumi@zixia
发信站: 日月光华 (2006年07月15日14:14:36 星期六), 站内信件
[省略小镇风光原作Ansi]
发信人: wumi (五迷), 信区: ASCIIArt
标 题: 迷道乱谈——评“小镇风光”
发信站: BBS 大话西游站 (Wed Jun 28 21:21:19 2006), 转信
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▕ ╱ ╱ 迷道乱谈 ╱
▕ ╱ ╲ 评“小镇风光” ╲
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长期以来,在自己作画的同时也看到了很多高手的精彩画作,从中受到了不少启发。
有时候看到一些系列作品或者同类作品,感想也有很多,但是一直懒于下笔。看到了很是
佩服惊讶的大作,也想说上两句,但一打开“记事本”,却迟迟下不了笔,不是不想夸人
,实在是不会夸人。于是我想到了一个办法,起一个总的题目——“迷道乱谈”,一是使
自己对于ASCIIArt作品的鉴赏点评文字有一个系列的感觉,能让喜欢听我瞎扯朋友敦促我
多写一些,二是让这些或多或少的文字不至于轻易淹没在众多的帖子中。
废话说得太多了,现在切入正题。我这次想谈的是这两天parr和windream刚刚贴出的
“小镇风光”。
parr和windream是近一年来比较活跃,而且作品水平也比较高的两个画手。对于parr
,我最喜欢的作品是“米是一朵花”,他的作品特点已经有很多人评论过了,在这里我只
说一点——个人感觉他的喜欢用一些“小”字符,比如;,'等点字符,用这些字符作为点
缀或连接,使画面有一种跳跃的感觉。而对于windream,说实话,他的早期作品我并不是
十分关注,原因很简单,我觉得他的早期作品缺少自己的独特的东西,而他的近期作品
“Schloss Neuschwanstein”“Lindau Bodensee”却使我有眼前一亮的感觉,用п[等略
带笔触痕迹的字符表现画面中较小的物体,使这些“小”物体(实际上却是较大的物体,
比如船)看起来更加精致,以至于使整个画面看起来十分大气,较少的字符运用也节约出
了大量的空间留白,使画面的构图更易把握,这在线条画中是十分难得的事情。
谈完了我对两位画手的印象,再讲一讲我对于原画的理解。在我看来,这副画最大的
亮点应该是它表现出来的光影关系:中景的墙壁、阳台使用了冷暗色调,与远景中的小巷
深处形成了明暗、冷热的对比,加上远景中阳光扇及地面上的高光处理,以及近景的花上
撒下的一缕阳光,这些丰富的光影变化,使整个画面产生了纵深感,也渲染了一种生活情
趣。
然而,原画的这些特点如果想通过ASCIIArt简单的几种颜色表现出来简直有点难为人
了,如果想达到原画类似的效果就必须作以取舍。对于线条画中表现光影关系的例子佳作
,我推荐“一大一小”两副画:“大”的是flubber画的Myth Legend,“小”的是lzl画
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最后应该具体谈谈这两副画了。首先谈谈parr的画,应该说这副画的风格与他以往的
画区别不大。对于墙壁、大门、标牌这些相对静止的物体处理起来相对简单,使用了大量
的直线线条,而对于花瓶等较小的物品,则使用了所谓的“小”字符。在所有的字符处理
中,我较为欣赏画面右侧楼梯栏杆的画法。在整体画面方面,这副画的透视效果也是比较
强的,基本上能让人感觉到小巷的纵深感。至于色彩方面,parr并没有把太多的心思用在
表现光影上,大规模的使用暗色,而在作为点睛的高亮部分色彩太杂,反而没有起到相应
的效果,没有提高整个画面的亮度。
再说windream的画,这副画在构图上比较丰满,也的确表现了更多的细节,在个别字
符的选用上也很下功夫,最为有趣的是——近景中同样的鲜花,由两个人分别演绎,竟然
差别如此的大,而又不相伯仲。在整体画面的透视感上,windream的画略逊一筹。在色彩
方面,windream下了更多的功夫,也初见效果,他没有拘泥于原画的光影关系,从中有些
改动,在同样的画面右侧楼梯位置,光影变化十分明显。但是,由于在基础线条的运用上
windream并没有很好的体现出透视效果,这就使他精心构造的光影细节没有充分的发挥出
来。
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Title: Lost Road Talk Commentary Small Town Scenery by wumi@zixia
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[Original Ansi of small town scenery]
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Title: Misguided Talk Commentary Small Town Scenery
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Talking nonsense
Comment on small town scenery
For a long time, while painting by myself, I have also seen the wonderful paintings of many masters and received a lot of inspiration from them.
Sometimes I see some series of works or similar works, and I have a lot of thoughts, but I have been too lazy to write. I am very impressed after seeing them.
I admire the surprising masterpiece, and I want to say a few words, but as soon as I open the notepad, I can't write it. It's not that I don't want to praise others.
I really don't know how to praise people, so I thought of a way to give a general topic, "misguided talk". One is to use
I feel like I have a series of appreciation and comments on ASCIIArt works, which can make friends who like to listen to my nonsense urge me.
Secondly, write more so that these more or less words will not be easily drowned in numerous posts.
Too much nonsense. Now let’s get to the point. What I want to talk about this time is what parr and windream just posted in the past two days.
small town scenery
parr and windream are two painters who have been relatively active in the past year and their works are of relatively high quality. For parr
My favorite work is Rice is a Flower. Many people have commented on the characteristics of his works. Here I only
Let's talk about it. I personally feel that he likes to use some small characters, such as;,' and other dot characters, and use these characters as dots.
The decoration or connection gives the picture a sense of jumping. To be honest with windream, I am not a fan of his early works.
I am very concerned about it. The reason is very simple. I feel that his early works lack something unique of their own, while his recent works
Schloss Neuschwanstein Lindau Bodensee made me feel bright. Use п[etc. abbreviated
Characters with traces of brush strokes represent smaller objects in the picture, making these small objects actually larger objects.
For example, the boat looks more refined, making the whole picture look very grand, and the use of fewer characters also saves time.
A large amount of white space makes the composition of the picture easier to grasp. This is a very rare thing in line drawings.
After talking about my impressions of the two painters, let me talk about my understanding of the original painting. In my opinion, this painting is the biggest
The highlight should be the relationship between light and shadow. The walls and balconies in the middle shot use cool and dark tones, and the alley in the distant shot.
The contrast between light and dark, hot and cold is formed in the depth, coupled with the sunlight fan in the distant view and the highlight treatment on the ground, as well as the flowers in the close view.
A ray of sunshine casts down. These rich changes in light and shadow give the whole picture a sense of depth and also exaggerate a kind of life emotion.
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However, if you want to express these characteristics of the original painting through a few simple colors of ASCIIArt, it is a bit difficult.
If you want to achieve a similar effect to the original painting, you must make some choices. Excellent examples of the relationship between light and shadow in line drawings
I recommend two paintings, one big and one small. The big one is Myth Legend painted by flubber and the small one is painted by lzl.
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Finally, we should talk about these two paintings in detail. First, let’s talk about Parr’s paintings. It should be said that the style of this painting is different from his previous paintings.
There is not much difference in painting. For relatively static objects such as walls, doors, and signs, it is relatively simple to process and a large number of them are used.
straight lines, while for smaller items such as vases, so-called small characters are used in all character treatments
In the middle, I prefer the painting method of the stair railing on the right side of the picture. In terms of the overall picture, the perspective effect of this painting is also relatively good.
It's strong. It basically makes people feel the depth of the alley. As for the color, parr didn't put much thought into it.
In expressing light and shadow, dark colors are used on a large scale, but the highlights in the highlights are too colorful and have no corresponding effect.
The effect does not increase the brightness of the entire screen.
Let’s talk about windream’s painting. This painting is relatively rich in composition and indeed shows more details in individual words.
A lot of effort was put into the selection of talismans. The most interesting thing is that the same flowers in the close-up are interpreted by two people separately.
The difference is so big, but they are almost the same. Windream’s painting is slightly inferior in terms of the perspective of the overall picture. In terms of color,
On the other hand, windream has put more effort into it and has begun to see results. He did not stick to the relationship between light and shadow in the original painting, and there are some elements from it.
Change: In the same picture on the right side of the stairs, the light and shadow changes are very obvious. However, due to the use of basic lines
windream did not reflect the perspective effect very well, which prevented the light and shadow details that he carefully constructed from being fully brought out.
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