へ , へ ハ ィ ^^ , '﹨ ﹨ ﹨ < ﹐' つ ﹨ , ,; へ ﹨ ﹐'' ﹨ ,; '. ﹐; ','; ' ;,' ' , ,;, ,; ; ' ,'; ' , ,; ; , ' , , Sender: Castellio percyshelley Right to Heresy, Area: ANSI Train02 Title: 2 Dreams take off from here Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua Friday, April 22, 2011 23:53:38, site mail This picture has a good artistic conception, but there are too many problems with details. I think it just pays too much attention to details. Inconsistent matching It’s the same as the previous one. At that time, I paid too much attention to details and liked to use special characters too much. But on the other hand, those dark silk masters No matter how many details are highlighted, the overall outline is quite clear. This should be what Qie Dian calls Part of the composition Furthermore, I now prefer to use some single-byte symbols and dots. There are some symbols that I am not willing to use now. Use multiple times. It’s too thick or the traces are too heavy. For example Too thick *[0m *[m The traces are too heavy *[0m When used at corners, it’s a little stiff, but sometimes it’s combined with other Arcs and slashes can also have good effects *[0m *[m These are usually replaced by ' Back to this picture. What I don’t like about this picture. 1. The upper body of the character has too many twists and turns. 2 The basket is not well drawn and the arc is awkward. 3 There are too many details on the wheels. The steel wires inside can obviously be omitted. 4 The clouds are too big and steal the spotlight 5 For grass use *[32mミ*[m is relatively too big Maybe I will change it to this In Castellio percyshelley Right to Heresy's masterpiece: : Originally published by percyshelley :SPACE : , : へ へ : へ : : へ : ⌒ ﹤る 000 : へ ー ゝ : ............. omitted below The glass cup refers to Wut’s works へ :: " :: :: へ :::: :: :: : " ::: へ Where can I find my lost paradise among steel and concrete? " " " Source: Sun and Moon Guanghua bbs.fudan.edu.cn [FROM: 124.77.212.*]