发信人: DixReves (溫香軟玉燕依人), 信区: ANSI
标 题: 第七章作业 点评 by NSgan
发信站: 日月光华 (2009年09月26日09:09:01 星期六), 站内信件
要评作业。。。 以我现在的水平 真是不敢评雪莱啊。。。尤其居然还要评色块 唉
照例拖了好久。。。憋啊憋地写出点评。。。
关于改图 还好精华区里教程里的图片地址不过期 至少可以看一下原图 =。=
第一个图 茄子 呃是茄子吧 = =
色调和结构比较简单明朗的图 用b2a转了再修改 图的轮廓基本上是不差的了 只是有点
小小的偏肥。。。小细节方面比如叶梗的阴影是稍向上倾斜的 叶子的轮廓应该尽量稍稍
包住茄子 如果能注意到的话就更好了。。。
关于颜色 叶子和茄体上反光的效果并不是很好 修改的时候私以为不一定就要完全死忠
于原图的颜色和面积 主要还是要表现出反光效果 白色的面积可以适当减小一点 并且
考虑尝试使用更多颜色来突出反光效果比如高亮。。。
第二个图 小猪
嗯。。。这个破绽比较多一点 感觉雪莱兄有点儿偷懒了。。。= =
对比原图 身体的轮廓有许多需要修改的地方 一些地方尤其是耳朵 可以适当使用三角形
在与原图尽量相似的情况下保持轮廓的连贯性
当然也应该多注意参考原图中轮廓的弧度。。。比如救生圈的弧度 应该可以修得更精致
。。。
细节方面 眼珠、鼻孔等 可以使用更适当的字符 牙齿也可以用几个高亮色块解决
私以为修图的时候 最重要的还是画出原图的感觉。。。以此为目标对细节略微进行一点
修改 采用更适合表现出画面感觉的字符 是必须的@@ 比如这只小猪应该是比较可爱的。
。。但是如果轮廓比较毛糙 眼神表情用的字符比较呆板 就不可爱了。。。嘴角不一定
就需要和原图类似的一个) 可以使用让它笑容更自然的字符。。。
关于 自己写KB字体 字的大小可以再小一点点 笔画稍粗一点点夸张一点点饱满一点 否
则在黑底的印衬下会显得瘦骨嶙峋、、、
谈谈我用b2a的感受。。。@@
b2a毕竟是辅助工具 光靠b2a不行
b2a转出的图 不做细修是不太靠谱的。。。更加不能被b2a转成的图束缚住。。。应该在
充分利用b2a的辅助构图能力的同时 注意整体轮廓的流畅性 对b2a转成的粗图进行毫不
留情的精修。。。目标向着原图的感觉和意境前进。。。
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Title: Chapter 7 Homework Comments by NSgan
Sending station: Sun and Moon Guanghua Saturday, September 26, 2009 09:09:01, in-site mail
I have to evaluate the homework. With my current level, I really don’t dare to evaluate Shelley, especially when I have to evaluate the color blocks. Alas.
As usual, it took me a long time to write this review.
Regarding changing the picture, fortunately, the picture address in the tutorial in the essence area has not expired. At least you can take a look at the original picture.
The first picture is eggplant, uh, eggplant, right?
The image is relatively simple and clear in tone and structure. I converted it using b2a and then modified it. The outline of the image is basically not bad, just a little bit.
A little too fat. In terms of small details, such as the shadow of the leaf stem, which is slightly upward-sloping, the outline of the leaf should be as slight as possible.
Wrap the eggplant. It would be better if you could notice it.
Regarding the color, the reflective effect on the leaves and eggplant body is not very good. When I modified it, I thought it was not necessary to be completely loyal.
Due to the color and area of the original image, the main thing is to show the reflective effect. The white area can be appropriately reduced, and
Consider trying more colors to accentuate reflections such as highlights
The second picture is piggy
Well, this one has more flaws. I feel like Brother Shelley is a bit lazy.
Compared with the original image, there are many areas that need to be modified in the outline of the body. In some places, especially the ears, triangles can be used appropriately.
Keep the outline consistent while being as similar as possible to the original image
Of course, you should also pay more attention to the curvature of the outline in the original picture. For example, the curvature of the lifebuoy can be refined more accurately.
In terms of details, eyes, nostrils, etc., more appropriate characters can be used. Teeth can also be solved with a few highlight color blocks.
I personally think that when retouching a picture, the most important thing is to get the feeling of the original picture. With this goal, I can add a little bit of details.
It is necessary to modify and use characters that are more suitable for expressing the feeling of the picture. For example, this little pig should be cute.
But if the outline is rough and the characters used for eye expressions are dull, it won’t be cute. The corners of the mouth are not necessarily the same.
Just need one similar to the original picture. You can use characters to make the smile more natural.
Regarding writing your own KB font, the size of the characters can be a little smaller and the strokes a little thicker and a little exaggerated and a little fuller. No
Then it will look skinny against the black background.
Talk about my experience using b2a @@
After all, b2a is an auxiliary tool. B2a alone is not enough.
The picture converted from b2a is unreliable without careful editing, and it cannot be bound by the picture converted from b2a. It should be in
While making full use of b2a’s auxiliary composition ability, pay attention to the smoothness of the overall outline and make no adjustments to the rough image converted by b2a.
Refined and refined, the goal is to move towards the feeling and artistic conception of the original image.
You have to do the best with what God gave you.
You got to put the past behind you before you can move on.
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