发信人: Castellio (percyshelley|Right to Heresy), 信区: ANSI_Train02
标 题: 一封回信,勿外传
发信站: 日月光华 (2011年08月08日09:48:18 星期一), 站内信件
寄信人: zycw (淑女也疯狂)
标 题: Re: Starry Night(转寄)
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我真是好久未上来了,才看到你的这封邮件,本来想上光华点评下的,口黑口黑...
发现我的帐号估摸着许久未用已经没了,所以尽管是晚了点还是就在此邮件里说哈
子自己的意见,其实现在说让我点评我都好心虚,实在是你的ASC之路已远远走在我
前面,不过你要我评我厚脸说几句^^
漂亮,我基本以为看到的是几近完整的《Starry Night》原图了,构图与原图一致,
不过由于ASC码限制,下图的村庄之类的细节无奈的略掉,看了菠萝的线条和你的色块,
两相比较,这幅图果然还是用色块比较有表现力度,线条过柔,原图则是刚柔并济而
凸显一股勃勃生气,色块恰如其分的硬朗加上构图形成漩涡体现的柔较完美的体现着
一种生命的悸动,唯一让人觉得视觉上可再稍微有待完善的一点就是图左那直冲云霄
的树,这在整体构图上也是很重要的一个部分,感觉刚硬有余柔美不足,原图中暗绿、
褐色线条的交替运用给人一种树木婆娑蠕动正努力向上的炫目动感,而纯色块表现出
来的则更像直冲云霄的山峰,建议在树的黑色部分加些线条曲线增加一丝柔美,甚至
可用闪烁字符做得动感点的显示着树枝在舞动的感觉。
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Sender: Castellio percyshelley Right to Heresy, Area: ANSI Train02
Title: A reply not to be circulated outside
Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua Monday, August 8, 2011 09:48:18, site mail
Sender: zycw Ladies are also crazy
Title: Re: Starry Night Forward
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It’s been a long time since I’ve been here, and I just saw your email. I originally wanted to post it under Guanghua Dianping. It’s a black mouth and a bad mouth...
I found that my account has probably been deactivated since I haven’t used it for a long time, so even though it’s a little late, I’ll just say it in this email.
My own opinion. In fact, I feel guilty now if you ask me to comment. In fact, your ASC road is already far ahead of mine.
Previously, but you want me to comment on my shamelessness^^
Beautiful. I basically thought I was seeing an almost complete original picture of Starry Night. The composition is consistent with the original picture.
However, due to ASC code restrictions, details such as the village in the picture below were helplessly omitted. I looked at the lines of the pineapple and your color blocks.
Comparing the two, this picture is indeed more expressive using color blocks. The lines are too soft, while the original picture has a balance of hardness and softness.
Highlighting the vitality, the appropriate toughness of the color blocks and the softness reflected in the vortex formed by the composition perfectly reflect the
A kind of throbbing of life. The only thing that makes people feel that the visual aspect needs to be improved a little is the picture on the left that goes straight into the sky.
The tree is also a very important part in the overall composition. It feels hard but not soft enough. The original picture is dark green.
The alternating use of brown lines gives a dazzling sense of movement as the trees are squirming and trying to move upward, while the solid color blocks show
It looks more like a mountain peak soaring into the sky. It is recommended to add some lines and curves to the black part of the tree to add a touch of softness or even
Flashing characters can be used to make it more dynamic, giving the feeling of dancing branches.
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