Sender: around [password][Tomb Faction], message area: ASCIIArt Title: Re: 10th Anniversary Pit Stop First Draft Sending site: Gulang Tingtao Tue May 23 22:10:56 2006 , within the site Pay attention to overall coordination Study more about the structure of each part of the word The position and the whole character occupied by this head are too big and look very The proportions are in Chinese regular script, which is uncoordinated. It's enough overall. The whole word lacks a sense of strength I feel that you must not make a big head. This point is too straight and there is no point. That's the Q version. The main feeling is that it doesn't have the power of running script. What needs to be changed is to make the head smaller Then lift it up. Don't drag this leg on the ground. It's not energetic. Problems with this word and its categories It's like painting everything one stroke at a time. Don't worry about the rain. The proportions are out of proportion. Instead, it loses flexibility There are problems with these two words On the balance of the center of gravity word Internal center of gravity imbalance The same pair of well-written drum characters The ratio is also unbalanced and the other dimensions are smaller, causing the inches to be reduced to one. The head is mainly a matter of strokes, and the corners are flattened by the big head. I still feel strong enough to write a travel book. I need to think more about it. I think if The center of gravity has found this should Just go with the flow, don't move it cleanly, mop the floor, read the original word, you must be strong Another thing is to listen to the words and deliberately make them smaller.