发信人: flubber (跳跳马), 信区: ASCIIart
标 题: Re: 来凑个热闹
发信站: 饮水思源 (2003年09月17日13:50:04 星期三), 站内信件
光从字形上讲,这两个正的写得中规中距
没什么毛病,端正、平衡、统一。
就是少一点创意(嘻嘻,对你要求高一点)
那个斜的版本活泼一些,但字形还有缺陷。
比如:比划不统一,蓉字的横笔有连续的,有间断的,芙 还有波浪型的
两个字大小不一,虽说美术字不一定大小要一样,那也得构图平衡才行
芙字左右不对称,一竖不在正中央。
【 在 coollizard (爱在蜥元前) 的大作中提到: 】
: 改成这个字体吧。。。
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: ╭─┼──┼─╮ ╭─┼──┼─╮ ﹀
: ╭──┼──╮ ╭──┴──╮
: │ ╭╯│╰╮ ﹀
: ╭──┼──╮ ╭──╯──╮ 湖 畔 ﹏ ﹏﹏ ﹏, ﹏﹏﹏;﹏﹏﹏
: ╭╯╮ │┌───╮│ " "
: ╰-─╯ ╰─-╯ ╯╰───┘╰ " ﹋﹋ BM:deity Fenice
Sender: flubber hopping vault horse, message area: ASCIIart
Title: Re: Come and join in the fun
Sending site: Drinking water and remembering its source Wednesday, September 17, 2003 13:50:04, site mail
In terms of glyphs alone, these two positive ones are written with a regular middle spacing.
There is nothing wrong with it. It is correct, balanced and unified.
Just be a little less creative. Hehe, I will demand more from you.
The oblique version is more lively, but the font is still flawed.
For example, the gestures are not uniform. The horizontal strokes of Rong are continuous, discontinuous, Fu, and wavy.
The two characters are different in size. Although the artistic characters do not necessarily have to be the same size, the composition must be balanced.
The word "Fu" is asymmetrical on the left and right, and the vertical axis is not in the center.
Mentioned in coollizard's masterpiece:
: Change it to this font
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: " BM deity Fenice