发信人: NSgan (0558·恋吾勿别·对不起,我是傻瓜), 信区: ANSI
标 题: 我胡乱写技法交流帖><
发信站: 日月光华 (2009年05月13日13:33:43 星期三), 站内信件
dvd说要写的个么我就写了=,=
首先整个构思其实是取自五月天《后青春期的诗》中的部分歌词,这里不提供了@@
然后就是决定要画红花铺陈,以及华丽的自信的上进的坚定的手里捧着诗卷的(管你看
不看得出来- -)小姑娘=,=
很久很久没有动笔画大型人物了。。。以前也只画过朴素装武士,初次尝试华丽装少女
。。。刚上手的时候实在不知道画什么好
整个构图好简单,分两层,小姑娘一层,花海一层。由于斟酌了下觉得对我来说小姑娘
比较难画,根据名家之言,作图可以从难点入手,因此我就先画小姑娘了@@
对难点的切入口找在脸部轮廓上,使用了经典脸型,然后定了个帽子的大概大小和位置
,又描了头发。脸的大小一旦定下来,身体就只是慢慢延伸出去,私以为这样就挺好画
的了@@@@
女孩子的右上身很快就搞定了,然后画褶裙!从来没画过><不过看也看得多了=,-
自己以为,褶裙的好处在于,下摆各个角度的长短可以相当自由,只要不太过分,不形
成圆形也是可以挺好看的@@
褶裙右摆也画完了,第一层就初步搞定like this:
╲︶
╲
︵ ╭')╲
︶ ~╯ \_(╲
╰ ︵~╭╯ )
︶ ︶_ `
~╭ ◢′〉╯
︶╭'╱◢◣
乁╮◥◤
╭
( ╰ ╮ ╭╯
╮ ︶
╭╯╰╮
╮ (
)
︶ ╭
) ︵
︶
其实自己和另一个朋友以为这样最有意境了XP 但是大家都说看不出是个啥@@,ansi的写
实与留白始终是困扰我的两大难题啊><于是乎就把左半身也完整了下like this:
__ __
第二步 ╲~@ ╱ \ 第三步 ╲~@ ╱ \
~╲_ / | ~╲_ / |
︵ ╭')╲_ ' ︵ ╭')╲_ ' _
︶ ~╯ \_( ˋ-、__ ︶ ~╯ \_( ˋ-、_\
╰ ︵~╭╯ ) ╰ ︵~╭╯ ) (
︶ ︶_ ` ~ ︶ ︶_ ` ~ `﹨\╮
~╭ ◢′〉╯ ~╭ ╱′〉╯ ︵ˋ╯)
︶╭'╱◢◣ ︶╭'╱ ╲ ︳`~︶
乁╮◥◤ 乁╮╲╱ /
\ \ ︳
| | | |
╭ ∕ ﹨ ╭ ∕ ﹨╭╭╮
( ╰ ╮ ╭ ╯ ╰ ( ╰ ╮ ╭ ╯ ╰ )
╮ ︶ ) ︵ ) ╮ ︶ ) ︵ ) ╰
╭╯╰╮ ╰ ~'╰╮ ╭╯ ╭╯╰╮ ╰ ~'╰╮ ╭╯ ╭╯
╮ ( ︶ ╮ ( ︶ (
) ) ╭╯
︶ ╭ ︶ ) ︵
╮ ) ︵ ︶ ╮
︶
为了让大家看清是什么所以使用了比较多的颜色@@
帽子这边和头的比例可能有点不太对,不管那么多了,只要第一眼看起来还ok就ok-,-
其实有斟酌过帽筒的大小,但是为了把头显得小一点,最后还是选择了上述模样
总觉得左手比右手难画很多,因为头发和诗卷把右臂遮掉而可以忽略右臂,左臂就要全描
了>< 诗卷也因为大家都说色块难以理解,而改成了线条。事实上我觉得无缝条件下也许
用色块效果还是不错的@@
人都说我把女孩子画肥了>< 在最终版中我削瘦了她的腰>< 我对女孩子的线条还真的不
太能掌握。。。无比觊觎小o的ggw ing...其实。。。大概因为我自己本身比较喜欢稍微
有一点肉肉的女孩子?- -不说废话了不说废话了><
第三步的女孩,总觉得可以不需要那么详细,可以删减一些字节以留白而更有意境,但是
自己功力浅薄,无法可为了,女孩不想再画了这就算完了- -
然后画花海!花海也从来没有画过不知所措啊T.T芦苇一堆倒是画过的。。。画得像是稻
草- -
于是乎想起小o的《天路》有花和草原,去借鉴了下,司机又推荐了著名大侠parr的著名
作品《cosmos》,借鉴来借鉴去,就画出了一堆很不严谨的花 >< like this:
ヽ
(乁
︶
╭)
、 `
`
╰( ˋ
╰) ︵、 `‵ ˋ
╲ \ `╯ ′ ` ╮ `
\ ╭、 ~\ ˊ
╲╭︵ ︶ ︶\
(︵╯ , ︵ \ ╰) ╲ ╭~ ╮
╲ ︵(╭` ︵ `\ (︵(ノ(
~╲ ╰(╯ ~) ~ ) ╲ \ (ヽノ) ╭(︶╯
\ ︶\ ╰╮) `)╮ ╰~╲ ︵
\ ︶ ╲ ╭\
最后拼起来,就成了@@ 但是有人说颜色太多了,而此人正是将来此画的拥有者,我虽然觉
得颜色再多只要能平衡好感觉就ok,但是颜色能少点自然是最好的,画面的元素和颜色都
是要求精致的><
于是乎我把衣服帽子的颜色都改成了白色,宁愿削减元素的鲜明度,也要精简颜色>< 而且
在我给出的最终版中,为了更少的颜色干扰,其实是把花枝都去掉的,至于最终的效果如
何,请各位自己打分了><
最后再加上用来点睛的句子
like this:
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此生唯一自传 ╲~@ ╱ \
~╲_ / |
愿如诗一般 ヽ ︵ ╭')╲_ ' _
︶ ~╯ \_( ˋ-、_\
╰ ︵~╭╯ ) (
无论多远未来 (乁 ︶ ︶_ ` ~ `﹨\╮
︶ ~╭ ╱′〉╯ ︵ˋ╯)
︶╭'╱ ╲ ∕ `~︶
读来都灿烂 ╭) 乁╮╲╱ /
、 ` \ ︳
` | |
╰ ˋ ╭ ∕ ﹨╭╭╮
╰) ︵、 `‵ ˋ ( ╰ ╮ ╭ ╯ ╰ )
`╯ ′ ` ╮ ` ╮ ︶ ) ︵ ) ╰
╭、 ~ ˊ ╭╯╰╮ ╰ ~'╰╮ ╭╯ ╭╯
╭︵ ︶ ︶ ╮ ( ︶ (
(︵╯ , ︵ ╰) ) ╭~ ╮╭╯
︵(╭` ︵ ` ︶ ) ︵ (︵(ノ(
~ ╰(╯ ~) ~ ) (ヽノ) ╮ ╭(︶╯
)╮ ︶ ╰╮) `)╮ ╰~
︶ ︶
这部作品其实就应该叫《后青春期的诗》,对于这幅作品,不仅是画给别人的,更是画给
自己的。画中的女孩,不仅仅是个女孩,她是个象征,坚定自信追求美丽幸福的象征。
于是我觉得如果不拿出来挂,似乎很对不起画中的女孩,正巧dvd昨晚给了我一句“梦回
盛世光华”,所以就借他的题词去做进站了 - -
如果有兴趣,还没有听过《后……》这首歌的朋友们可以去听一下,品味一下歌词,很
不错的
画完之后,cherryfox同学说让她想起小o的稻草人(正确的说应该是作品《秋》?)我想
没错,嗯构图是一样的@@我之前也照着一张原图画过一副sai,构图也是一样的><这种构
图很经典啊~~~~em~~~~
技法交流over了。。。
【 在 daviddvd (0519|dvd|let's fly high) 的大作中提到: 】
: 【 以下文字转载自 Service 讨论区 】
: 【 原文由 ServG 所发表 】
: space:)
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: 夏·梦回盛世光华。。。 ~╲_ / |
: ヽ ︵ ╭')╲_ ' _
: ︶ ~╯ \_( ˋ-、_\
: ╰ ︵~╭╯ ) (
: (乁 ︶ ︶_ ` ~ `﹨\╮
: .................(以下省略)
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Sender: NSgan 0558 Love me, don’t leave me. I’m sorry, I’m a fool. Message area: ANSI
Title: I randomly write technical exchange posts><
Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua Wednesday, May 13, 2009 13:33:43, site mail
The DVD asked me to write something, so I wrote it.
First of all, the whole idea is actually taken from some lyrics in Mayday’s poem about post-adolescence, which are not provided here@@
Then there is the decision to paint a red flower arrangement, and the gorgeous, confident, motivated, and determined person holding the poem in his hand. Look at it.
I can't tell, little girl,
It’s been a long, long time since I drew a large-scale figure. I’ve only drawn samurai in simple costumes before. This is my first time trying a girl in gorgeous costumes.
When I first started, I really didn’t know what to draw.
The whole composition is so simple. It is divided into two layers, one for the little girl and one for the sea of flowers. After careful consideration, I felt that for me, the little girl is the best.
It is difficult to draw. According to the words of famous experts, you can start from the difficult points, so I will draw the little girl first@@
The entry point for the difficult point was found on the facial contour. I used a classic face shape and then determined the approximate size and position of the hat.
I also traced the hair. Once the size of the face was determined, the body just slowly extended out. I thought it would be easy to draw like this.
It’s @@@@
The girl’s upper right body was quickly finished, and then I drew the pleated skirt. I have never done anything before><but I have seen it a lot.
I think the advantage of pleated skirts is that you can be quite free in the length of the hem at all angles as long as it’s not too excessive and shapeless.
It can also look pretty in a round shape@@
The right hem of the pleated skirt has also been painted. The first layer has been completed like this
'
'
乁
In fact, I and another friend thought this was the most artistic XP, but everyone said they couldn’t tell what it was written by @@ ansi
Reality and blank space have always been two major problems that bother me><So I also completed the left half of the body like this
Step 2 Step 3
' ' ' '
﹨
' '
乁 乁
﹨ ﹨
' '
In order to let everyone see clearly what it is, I used more colors@@
The proportion between the hat and the head may be a little wrong. It doesn’t matter so much, as long as it looks OK at first glance, it’s OK.
In fact, I considered the size of the hat tube, but in order to make my head look smaller, I finally chose the above look.
I always feel that the left hand is much more difficult to draw than the right hand. Because the hair and the poem cover the right arm, the right arm can be ignored. The left arm must be fully drawn.
>< The poem was also changed to lines because everyone said that the color blocks were difficult to understand. In fact, I think it might be possible under seamless conditions.
The effect of using color blocks is pretty good@@
People say I made the girl fatter>< In the final version I slimmed down her waist>< I really don’t care about the girl’s lines.
I'm so capable of controlling it and I covet little O's ggw ing... Actually, it's probably because I prefer a little bit.
A girl with a little flesh, stop talking nonsense, stop talking nonsense><
The girl in the third step always feels that she doesn’t need to be so detailed and can delete some bytes to leave blank space and make it more artistic, but
My skills are shallow and there is nothing I can do about it. If the girl doesn’t want to draw anymore, it’s over.
Then I painted a sea of flowers. I have never been overwhelmed by a sea of flowers. T.T I have painted a pile of reeds, and they look like rice.
Grass
Then I remembered Little O's "The Road to Heaven There Are Flowers and Grasslands" and tried to learn from it. The driver also recommended the famous hero Parr's "Flowers and Grasslands".
In my work Cosmos, I drew a bunch of very loose flowers by borrowing them from here and there >< like this:
ヽ
乁
,
ノ
ヽノ
Finally, when we put it together, it became @@, but someone said there were too many colors, and this person was the future owner of the painting. Although I felt
No matter how many colors you have, it’s ok as long as it balances the feeling, but it’s best if you can have fewer colors. The elements and colors of the picture are both
It requires refinement><
So I changed the color of my clothes and hats to white. I would rather reduce the brightness of the elements and simplify the colors >< And
In the final version I gave, in order to reduce color interference, all the flowers and branches were actually removed. As for the final effect, it is as follows:
Hey, please rate it yourself><
Finally, add a sentence to highlight
like this
The only autobiography in this life
May it be like poetry ヽ ' '
No matter how far in the future 乁﹨
'
It’s brilliant to read 乁
﹨
'
,
ノ
ヽノ
In fact, this work should be called Post-Adolescent Poetry. For this work, it is not only painted for others, but also painted for
The girl in my painting is not just a girl, she is a symbol, a symbol of firmness and confidence in pursuing beauty and happiness.
So I felt that I would be sorry for the girl in the painting if I didn't take it out and hang it up. It happened that the DVD gave me the line "Dream Return" last night.
The glory of the prosperous age, so I borrowed his inscription to make the pit stop.
If you are interested and have not heard this song before, you can listen to it and taste the lyrics. It is very
good
After finishing the painting, classmate Cherryfox said that it reminded her of Little O’s scarecrow. To be more precise, it should be the work Qiu, I think.
That's right, the composition is the same@@I also made a sai based on an original painting before, and the composition is the same><This kind of composition
The picture is very classic em
Technique exchange is over
Mentioned in daviddvd 0519 dvd let's fly high's masterpiece:
: The following text is reproduced from the Service discussion forum
:Original article published by ServG
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: Xia Meng returns to the glory of the prosperous age
: ヽ ' '
:
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: 乁 ﹨
: ............. omitted below
CRYING IN DEEP RED
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