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发信人: comeonfulin (小猪呼噜噜), 信区: ASCIIArt 标题: 第七讲作业点评发信站: 南京大学小百合站 (Thu Oct 13 22:37:36 2005) 这是最后一次作业讲评，而且这次作业也是做的最差的。大部分学员都没有上交，其中固然因为一些人有毕业论文、考研等原因时间比较紧，但是我想稍微拿出一点时间还是可以完成的。很多人到了最后似乎失去了当初报名的热情，所以综合应用部分本次培训班的学员做的不如第一次。应该说ASCIIArt是一个没有难度的东西，通过本次培训，基本的东西都教给了大家，以后的探索完全靠各位自己去完成了。办这次培训班搞的我好累，当然这也是事先预料到的，为了大家能够真正学好ASCIIArt这门艺术我觉得也值了。但是从最终的成果看来本次培训班虎头蛇尾，结果令我很有些失望。二十几个人，交作业的不足三分之一。最后一讲色块的，brightwang辛辛苦苦写了教程，居然只有一个人交作业，都是以觉得难为理由不去尝试，我无话可说。不过我不是虎头蛇尾的人，所以既然我开了这个培训班，最后就一定好收个好尾。下面是最后一次作业讲评： ┌┐ ●┘ ASCIIArt短期培训班第七讲作业点评 ╭■ ╰╯ 2005.10.13 ╭══════╦═══════╦══════╦═══════╮ ║ xuhuiru ║ ivy ║ brightwang ║ comeonfulin ║ ╠══════╬═══════╬══════╬═══════╣ ║ marsnobel ║ IvyRose ║ xinyupf ║ willingox ║ ║ cat ║ tclscorpion ║ coca1122 ║ applecrystal ║ ║ yccaoqy ║ pipilu ║ lcb123 ║ WuLiHe ║ ║ yuyue ║ weneedlove ║ crush ║ StarryZ ║ ║ aigodisk ║ fnm ║ xuns ║ gmfyl ║ ║ dinger012 ║ iloveelva ║ smw ║ llmaggienju ║ ║ ║ txduyu ║ ChanghuiXu ║ imskyline ║ ╰══════╩═══════╩══════╩═══════╯ 作业未交作业已交优秀作业以下为各位学员所做的活动看版： No1. aigodisk □——————————————┤活动看版├——————————————□ Ω═════Ω 中国 ┏┄┓┏┄┓┏┄┓┅┄╮ 江苏.徐州 ◢▓▓▓▓▓▓◣ 矿业 ┆放┆┆鹤┆┆亭┆ ¤ ┇放飞梦想 CUMT ﹌ ▌▌﹌﹌﹌ ▌▌﹌大学 ┗┄┛┗┄┛┗┄┛╭┄╯ …………………… ╰┄┄ 202.119.199.87 ┇筑就辉煌 bbs.cumt.edu.cn ▇██∩╭╮∩██▇▆▄▃▂ 222.187.124.25 ╰┄┄┄┄┄┄ゞ┄┄┄┄┄┅ □—————————————————————————————————————□ No2. IvyRose □————————————┤ 小百合活动看板 ├————————————□ $userid 生活无处不广告 ┏━━┓┏━━┓┏━━┓┏━━┓┏━━┓ ┃ ┃┃ ┃┃ ┃┃ ┃ ┃ ☆ 欢迎你来到这里 ☆ ┃ ━ ┃┃ ┃┃ ━ ┃┃ ┓┛ ┃ ☆ ┃ ┃┃ ┃┃ ┃┃ ┃ ┃ ^_^ 8区 AD Art BM ：yenan ┗ ┛┗━━┛┗ ┛┗ ┗┛ ┻ □—————————————————————————————————————□ No3. tclscorpion □————————————┤ 小百合活动看板 ├————————————□ ★ 勤奋～ ╭═╮ ╭══╮╭╮╭╮ ★ ☆ 讲述欢迎$userid来到 ║ ║ ╞═ │║║║║ ☆ ★ 求实兰大人兰州大学版 ║ ╰╮│ ═╡║╰╯║ ★ ☆ ⿰ 自己的故事 ╰══╯╰══╯╰══╯ ☆ ★ 进取 ⿳ ﹏ ╯ 【2】区乡情校谊→lzu BM:tclscorpion ★ □—————————————————————————————————————□ No4. xinyupf ↑ ┼ ┏╮ ┋ ─┼─ ┌┐丿 \╭─╮ ╭─╮ 版主: jabbar ╰┛ ┋ ┌─┐ └┘丿 \ ╭-╯ │╳│ lcns ╭┓ ┋ └─╯ ││丿 / ││ ╯ ╰ ┗╯ ╰━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━●●●●╬ No5. lcb123 □————————————┤ 小百合活动看板 ├————————————□ ＾_＾◤$userid - - ♀～～～～～～～～～～♂ ⌒ ♀ ┌┬┬┐┌┐┌┐ ♂ 人世间的喜怒哀乐 ♀ ││ ││││ ♂ ˇ_ˇ 悲欢离合 - - ♀ ││ └┤├┘ ♂ ┆ ┆ 尽在电视艺术中体验！◢ ︶ ♀ └┘　 ╰╯ ♂ □—————————————————————————————————————□ No6. applecrystal □————————————┤ 小百合活动看板 ├————————————□ welcome to → 欢迎访问 → ╭──╮ ╭╮╭╮ ╭──╮ ╭╮ ╭──╮ │╭┬┤ ││││ ╰╮╭╯ ││ ╰╮╭╯ 九区：罪与罚 │╰┘│ │╰╯│ ╭╯╰╮ │╰─╮ ││ ╰──╯ ╰──╯ ╰──╯ ╰──╯ ╰╯ BM: applecrystal □—————————————————————————————————————□ No7. gmfyl □—————————————————————————————————————□ ○ ┌┐ ╭┬╮ ┌┐││╭┬┬╮┌┐┌┐╭┬┬╮┌┤├┐╭─┬╮┌┐┌┐╭┬┬╮ ││││││││││││││││ ││ ╭┬┤│││││││││ ││││││││╰┤├╯│├┴╯ ││ │││││││││├┴╯ └┘└┘╰┴┴╯ ╰╯ ╰┴─╯ └┘ ╰┴┴┘╰┴┤│╰┴─╯ ╰─┴╯ .:::::`::::. .::::::::::. .::::::::::. .::``````::. .:::::: :::::..::::`..`::::..:: ::::: :::..:`.::::::.`:. ::::::: :::::::::: :::: :::::::.`:::`.:::::: .........:: `:::::: :::::``:::.`::`.:::``:::.`:`.::::``::.```````.:` `:::::.::::` `::::..::::` `::::.:::::` `::::::::::` ``::::`` ``::::`` ``::::`` ``::::`` $userid █◤ █◤██◤██ ██◤█ 欢迎访问菲靡靡之音 ◢ ◢◤██◢██◢◤ _ ,_,_,.-. | █ █◢█◥◤██◢█ (_|| | ||- \/| eyes on me please █◢█ ,_| |,_/  □—————————————————————————————————————□ 从上交的作业来看，一个突出的问题就是大家对于颜色的选择还不够精练。所有作品中颜色的使用都闲多，这一点我在教程里就已经预先提醒大家了。活动看版的颜色不宜太花哨，要尽量与系统保持平衡。这个还需要以后通过练习慢慢养成习惯。其次个别作品问题较大。例如第五个空的地方太多，显得整个看版极不协调。第四个明显不符合活动看版的要求。第七个则有点太离谱了，百合活动看版都是五行代码，我在教程里已经明确说明。以后大家再做活动看版最好先复制一个现成的框架来，这样就会有个限制。在这里对第一个作品提出表扬。除了色彩使用有些过多之外，无论是创意还是构图都很赞。常常听到大家说没有创意，只要多看看这样的作品，应该说肯定会有所收获的。

Sender: comeonfulin piggy snoring, message area: ASCIIArt Title: Assignment Comments on Lecture 7 Sending station: Nanjing University Sayuri Station Thu Oct 13 22:37:36 2005 This is the last assignment review, and this assignment was also the worst. Most students did not turn it in. Although time is tight because some people have graduation thesis, postgraduate entrance exams, etc., but I want to spare some time. It can be completed. Many people seem to have lost their enthusiasm for signing up in the end, so the comprehensive application part of this training course of students did not do as well as the first time It should be said that ASCIIArt is not difficult. Through this training, the basic things have been taught to everyone. The future exploration is entirely up to you. I am very tired from holding this training class. Of course, this is also expected in advance. I think it’s worth it for everyone to really learn the art of ASCIIArt. But judging from the final results, this time The training course ended in a tailspin. The result made me a little disappointed. There were more than 20 people and less than one-third handed in the homework. The last lecture. Brightwang from Color Block worked hard to write the tutorial, but only one person turned in the homework, all because it was difficult. If you don’t try, I have nothing to say. But I’m not a person who starts at the beginning but ends at the end, so now that I’ve opened this training class, in the end It must end well The following is the last homework review Comments on the seventh lecture of the ASCIIArt short-term training course 2005.10.13 xuhuiru ivy brightwang comeonfulin marsnobel IvyRose xinyupf willingox cat tclscorpion coca1122 applecrystal yccaoqy pipilu lcb123 WuLiHe yuyue weneedlove crush StarryZ aigodisk fnm xuns gmfyl dinger012 iloveelva smw llmaggienju txduyu ChanghuiXu imskyline Homework not handed in Homework handed in Excellent homework The following is a preview of the activities performed by the students. No1. aigodisk Activity viewing version Ω Ω China Jiangsu.Xuzhou Mining releases Crane Pavilion and releases dreams CUMT University 202.119.199.87 Build Brilliance bbs.cumt.edu.cn 222.187.124.25 ゞ No2. IvyRose Little Lily Activity Board $userid Advertising is everywhere in life welcome you here ^ ^ District 8 AD Art BM yenan No3. tclscorpion Little Lily Activity Board diligent Narration Welcome $userid Seeking Truth Lanzhou University Edition own story Enterprising District 2 Nostalgia and School Friendship lzu BM:tclscorpion No4.xinyupf 丿 Moderator: jabbar 俿lcns 丿 No5. lcb123 Little Lily Activity Board $userid ⌒ The joys and sorrows of the world joys and sorrows Experience it all in TV art No6. applecrystal Little Lily Activity Board welcome to welcome to visit District 9 Crime and Punishment BM: applecrystal No7. gmfyl .::::: ::::. .:::::::::::. .::::::::::. .:: :::. .:::::: :::::..:::: .. ::::..:: ::::: :::..: .::::::. :. ::::::: :::::::::: :::: :::::::. ::: .:::::: .........:: :::::: ::::: :::. :: .::: :::. : .:::: ::. .: :::::.:::: ::::..:::: ::::.::::: ::::::::::: :::: :::: :::: :::: $userid Welcome to FeiMiMiYin , , ,. . eyes on me please , ,  Judging from the assignments submitted, a prominent problem is that everyone is not refined enough in their choice of colors. All works There is a lot of use of medium colors. I have reminded everyone of this in advance in the tutorial. The color of the activity viewing version is not suitable. It’s too fancy. Try to keep a balance with the system. This needs to be gradually developed through practice in the future. Secondly, some works have bigger problems. For example, the fifth one has too many empty spaces, making the whole page extremely uncoordinated. The fourth one has too many empty spaces. It obviously does not meet the requirements of the event viewing version. The seventh one is a bit too outrageous. Lily’s activity viewing version is all five lines of code. I am It has been clearly stated in the tutorial that it is best to copy a ready-made framework before doing activities and viewing the version in the future. This will There is a limit I would like to praise the first work here. Except for the excessive use of colors, both in terms of creativity and composition. It’s great. I often hear people say that they are not creative. As long as you look at more works like this, you will definitely gain something.

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