发信人: xuhuiru (丰雪心), 信区: ASCIIArt
标 题: ASCIIArt短期培训班第六讲作业点评
发信站: 南京大学小百合站 (Thu Nov 11 15:11:47 2004)
一个多星期没怎么上网,都在忙考试. 不过还好考试已经考完了,人也
累的半死. 我们小百合这次ASCIIArt短期培训班主讲都是darkpal师兄一人
忙前忙后,说来自己很惭愧,没什么时间帮些忙. 这是第六讲,第六讲的作
业点评就让偶来写写想法吧.
第六讲主要针对系统画面,包括版面的进版,活动看版,进站离站画面.
就作业提交状况来说大家这次更显得积极,质量也有所提高,更加注重了自
由发挥. 那么就先让我们来看看大家提交最多的活动看版类作业情况.
按发表的时间顺序[本人添加上下系统框架以供大家参考]
作品编号1
□————————————┤ 小 百 合 活 动 看 板 ├————————————□
┄ 热爱生活,装点家居 ┄┄┄┄┄┄┄┄┄┄┄┄┄┄┄┄╮ ┅═⊙
N ╭ ┌╮ ┌ $userid : ╰┄┄┄┄┄╮ ║
┇ ├┤╭╮ ┌╮▕ ╰ ├╯╭╮ ├ ┬ ╭┄┄7区 精致手工┄┄┄┄┄┄╯ ┇
║ ├┤ └╯ ╰├┤ ┊ ╰┄┄┄╮ 欢迎您的光临!
⊙═┅ 奇思妙想,变废为宝 ╰┄ BM: rhwfu brightwang
□—————————————————————————————————————□
by brightwang handicraft版活动看版
作品标号2
□————————————┤ 小 百 合 活 动 看 板 ├————————————□
Single版祝福 ┏━┓ ┾ ╁ 日历
┖ ▎● ┾┣═┫ ┰┑ 11月
⺌ ⺌ ﹐ ┱┱ Ⅲ  ̄ ̄ ║│ サ や ゝ ┑
┑
ル ル イ∩ ││ │ 匕匕 ┃ ㄗ ㄖ ˋトハ ‘┽、
│ │
┙┕═ ‵ ┷ ┷
□—————————————————————————————————————□
by sute Single版活动看版
作品编号3
□————————————┤ 小 百 合 活 动 看 板 ├————————————□
___ $userid__ !@***═*════┈#@**╤════*▃▃▃. ◢
\ 近期举办~-╯南大第2界电子竞技大赛 ━━━━|▅▅▅█▅▅█▇▇]
┋ _...._*、__ /@▃___▃━━_▓▓##@@%&***━━━┻━┻
┋ _ = j ╭╮( ╭/│ │ 欢迎关注 E_Sports 版
┋_ = / / ╰─╯ \ \ BM:zealotray & potti
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by potti E_Sports 版活动看版
作品编号4
□————————————┤ 小 百 合 活 动 看 板 ├————————————□
$userid ╭══╮╭─╥╮╭══╮╭═╮ ╭══╮╭══╮╭╮╭╮
You are welcome to║ ═╡║ ║║║╭═╮║ ║ ╰╮╭╯│ ═╡║╰╯║
║ ═╡║║ ║║╰ ║║ ╰╮╭╯╰╮╞═ │║╭╮║
┏╮╭┓ ┏╮╭┓ ╰══╯╰╨─╯╰══╯╰══╯╰══╯╰══╯╰╯╰╯
╰╲╱╯ ╰╲╱╯ ★☆★☆★ BM:OnlyLonely Heisenberg ★☆★☆★
□—————————————————————————————————————□
by comeonfulin english版活动看版
作品编号5
□————————————┤ 小 百 合 活 动 看 板 ├————————————□
\ く ミ ╱◎ ∫ く∫ (
丿 ㄧ / ╱◎ 来吧 Join Us ︷彡 ( 丿 ╮
︵∞彡 ㄑ ╰-◎ 一起体味滑动的精彩! / `-( ﹏ ﹏)-' \╯
( ) ─- ╲ ╱
◎◎◎◎ ──----- ┄→『6』→Skating┄┉┄溜溜族┉┄ ⊙─- --
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by fosmile skate版活动看板
作品编号6
□————————————┤ 小 百 合 活 动 看 板 ├————————————□
⊙ ● ╭─╮┌─╮╭ ╮╭┬╮╭─╮╭─╮╭ ╮╭ ╭─╮╭╮╭┌─╮
☉ ⊕│ ┬├─ │ │ │ ╰─╮│ ├─┤│ ├─┤││││ │
○ ╰─╯└─╯╰─╯ ╰ ╰─╯╰─╯╰ ╯╰─╯╰ ╯╰╰╯└─╯
◎ へ ~ ⌒ 德文堂欢迎您!
BM: Gschumacher & Habsburg ˇ﹏ ﹍﹏ http://deutsch@bbs.nju.edu.cn
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by comeonfulin 德文堂版活动看版
作品编号7
□————————————┤ 小 百 合 活 动 看 板 ├————————————□
╭-╮ ╭-╮ ╭┄┄╮ ╭╭═╣
\ヾ`﹀'彡/ ╰┈╮╰-传播友谊╮ 信随心飞~ ╭传诵真情-╯║□║
│╲ ╱│┄┄传递祝福╯ ╭┈╯ ╭┈╯ ║…║
│ ︶ │ ╰┄传播文化╮ ╰╮ ice4fire ║::║
└───┘ 【7】→ ShortMessage ╰┄┈┄╯ yika1985 ╰═╯
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修改后作品:
□————————————┤ 小 百 合 活 动 看 板 ├————————————□
传递祝福┈┄┈┄┄╮ ╭┄┄╮ ╭╭═╣
ヘ﹀≈╮ ╭' ╭≈﹀〆 ┊ ╰┈╮╰--╮ 信随心飞~ ╭传诵真情-╯║□║
^へヾ┌──┐ヾへ^ ╰传播友谊╯╭┈╯ ╭┈╯ ║…║
│^﹀^│ ╰┄传播文化╮╰╮ ice4fire ║::║
└-─-┘ 【7】→ShortMessage ╰┄╯ yika1985 ╰═╯
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by fosmile ShortMessage看板(定稿)
作品编号8
□————————————┤ 小 百 合 活 动 看 板 ├————————————□
『4区』Human
人 O O 0 0 O X 0 0 O ● ● O 0 0 O X 0 0 O O
类 0 0 0 0 /■\/▲\ 0 0 0 0
漫 0 0 O O 0 Y O O 0 |\ |\ 0 O O 0 X O O 0 0
谈
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by by iamgodk 人类漫谈版活动看版
作品编号9
□————————————┤ 小 百 合 活 动 看 板 ├————————————□
古┅┅$userid : 2区 钱江潮 期待你的光临 !┅┅┅┅ о︵┅ O┅钱
┇╭─╮╭ ╮┌─╮╭┬╮╭┬╮╭─╮╭╮╭╭─╮ ╭ ο╮ ┇
┇╭┼╯├─┤├─ │ │ ├─┤││││ ┬ ( ╮ ╮ο┇
┇╰─╯╰ ╯└─╯╰╯ ╰┴╯╰ ╯╰╰╯╰─╯ ゜ ╰ ╯ヾ 丿 ┇
越┅┅┅┅┅┅east or west,home is best!┅┅┅┅┅┅ ≈ ≈╯ノノ≈ 塘
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□————————————┤ 小 百 合 活 动 看 板 ├————————————□
$userid : о︵ O
浙风江韵 east or west,home is best ! ╭ ο╮
3区 钱江潮(zhejiang) ( ╮ ╮ο
古越钱塘 期待您的光临! ╰ ╯ヾ 丿
~~ ~~ ≈≈≈ ≈≈ ≈╯ノノ≈
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by jwise 浙江版活动看版
OK!作品大家已经看了,在这里我主要讲一下大家做的这些活动看版存在
的一些普遍问题. 那就是:
首先:色彩过于绚烂. 也就是上色时选用颜色过多. 导致超过了系统活动
看版每行控制字符的数量,而无法显示. 这就又出现第二个问题. 这个问题在
作品1,2,4,7中都存在. 其中1中就算优化代码后还是会每行远远超出很多系
统限制的控制字符字符.
其次:色彩过于绚烂说得直接点就是“花哨”.活动看版作为BBS的宣传展
示平台首先强调的是中性,其次才是追求“漂亮”.
在这里我说下自己做活动看版几点值得大家注意的地方.
其一,一个活动看版选用的主色调颜色不要超过三种以上. 强调明亮,
朴素.
第二就是我们小百合站的活动看版的上下框架为红色,其中上框架有
“小百合活动看版”六个不同颜色的中文字体. 我们在做活动看版的时候
先在框架架构好再往里面添. 这样的方式就不会导致整体配色不协调和问
题三的存在. (这是当年ahQQ前辈赐教的)
再次:活动看版规格不符合要求. 我们站五行活动看版大家都注意到了. 但
是经常会出现宽度长了或者短了的情况. 一般情况以系统活动看版框架为基准.
左右留一个半角字符位置或者一个整字位置.
在文章的最后,特别要表扬一下fosmile,她所做的两个活动看版以及一个
进版实在很赞. 希望大家以后向她多多学习. 画画不仅要多画还要多看,还要
懂得吸取别人的精华为自己所用.
◣◤
· ◢◥ * 撑 在 只 那 且
一 岁 为 曾 行 ◣◤
* ╭╮ ╭╮ ◣◤ 只 月 撷 经 且 ◢◥
┃ ╲╱ ┃ ° ◢◥ 长 的 取 的 珍
┃|╲╱|┃ 篙 长 片 惜
╭╮┃| |┃╭━━╮ * 河 片
╰━╯ ┃┃╭╮┃ ◣◤ 泛 贝
╭╋┫╰━╯╭╮ ╭╮ ◢◥ 舟 壳
╰╯╰━━━╯┃︿︿┃╯
╭┃|┃|┃ ゜
◣◤ ╰╯ ╰╮-━╮
◢◥ ┃( )┣┳━━╮
╭╦╮ ╭╦╮ · ╰━-╯┃┳━╯ ╭╮
╠似╣ ╠水╣ ┃╭╮ ╰┃
╰╩╯ ╰╩╯ ╭┃╰━╮╭╮┃ · ◣◤
﹡╭╦╮ ╭╦╮ ◣◤ ╰╯ ┃━╯┃ ◢◥
╠流╣ ╠年╣ ◢◥ * ╭╰━━┃
╰╩╯ ╰╩╯ ╰━━━╯
ps:大家以后作画要养成一个好习惯,那就是把自己的名字放在画面当中,如果怕影响
画面就把颜色选成黑色. 这样既尊重了自己的创作也方便了借鉴的朋友.
xuhuiru@ASCIIArt
2004.11.11南大小百合
Sender: xuhuiru Feng Xuexin, message area: ASCIIArt
Title: Review of the sixth lecture of the ASCIIArt short-term training course
Sending station: Nanjing University Sayuri Station Thu Nov 11 15:11:47 2004
I haven't been online much for more than a week. I was busy taking exams. But fortunately, the exams are over and people are
I'm almost dead from exhaustion. Our Sayuri's ASCIIArt short-term training class is being taught by one person, darkpal.
I'm so busy that I feel ashamed to say that I don't have time to help. This is the sixth lecture. The composition of the sixth lecture
Let me comment on the industry and write down my thoughts.
The sixth lecture mainly focuses on the system screen, including the page entry, activity page viewing, entry and exit screens.
As far as the status of homework submissions is concerned, everyone is more positive this time, the quality has also improved, and they pay more attention to themselves.
It’s up to you. So let’s first take a look at the most submitted activity-reading assignments.
In chronological order of publication [I added the upper and lower system frameworks for your reference]
Work number 1
Little Lily Activity Board
Love life and decorate your home
N $userid :
District 7 Exquisite handicrafts
Welcome!
Wonderful ideas to turn waste into treasure BM: rhwfu brightwang
by brightwang handicraft version activity viewing version
Work number 2
Little Lily Activity Board
Single version blessing calendar
November
⺌ ⺌ ﹐ Ⅲ サ や ゝ
ル ル イ dagger ㄗ ㄖ トハ
by sute Single version activity viewing version
Work number 3
Little Lily Activity Board
$userid !@*** * #@** * .
The 2nd NTU E-Sports Competition will be held recently]
.... * @ ##@@%&***
j Welcome to E Sports version
BM:zealotray & potti
by potti E Sports version event viewing version
Work number 4
Little Lily Activity Board
$userid
You are welcome to
BM:OnlyLonelyHeisenberg
by comeonfulin english version activity viewing version
Work number 5
Little Lily Activity Board
く ミ く
丿 ㄧ Come on Join Us 丿
彡 ㄑ Let’s experience the excitement of sliding together! '
6 Skating yoyozu
by fosmile skate version event board
Work number 6
Little Lily Activity Board
へ ⌒ Welcome to Dewen Hall
BM: Gschumacher & Habsburg http: deutsch@bbs.nju.edu.cn
by comeonfulin Dewentang version event viewing version
Work No. 7
Little Lily Activity Board
ヾ '彡 Spread friendship, fly with faith and recite true love
send blessings
Spreading culture ice4fire ::
7 ShortMessage yika1985
Modified work
Little Lily Activity Board
send blessings
ヘ 'Let the letter fly with your heart and recite the true feelings
^へヾ ヾへ^ spread friendship
^ ^ Spread culture ice4fire ::
7 ShortMessage yika1985
by fosmile ShortMessage Kanban board finalized
Work No. 8
Little Lily Activity Board
Zone 4 Human
People O O 0 0 O X 0 0 O O 0 0 O X 0 0 O O
Class 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0
0 0 O O 0 Y O O 0 0 O O 0 X O O 0 0
talk
by by iamgodk Human Talk Edition Activity Viewing Edition
Work number 9
Little Lily Activity Board
Ancient $userid: District 2 Qianjiang Tide Looking forward to your visit о money
ο
ο
゜ヾ丿
Yue east or west, home is best! ノノ pond
Little Lily Activity Board
$userid : о
Zhefengjiangyun east or west,home is best! ο
District 3 Qianjiang Tide zhejiang ο
Guyue Qiantang looks forward to your visit ヾ丿
ノノ
by jwise Zhejiang version activity viewing version
OK, you have already seen the work. Here I will mainly talk about the activities you do to see the existence of the version.
Some common problems of . That is
First of all, the colors are too gorgeous. That is, too many colors are used when coloring. This results in exceeding the system activity.
The number of control characters in each line of the version cannot be displayed. This brings up the second problem. This problem is
They all exist in works 1, 2, 4 and 7. Even after optimizing the code in 1, each line will still far exceed the performance of many systems.
System-limited control character characters.
Secondly, the colors are too bright. To put it bluntly, it is gaudy. The event viewing page is used as a promotional exhibition for BBS.
The display platform first emphasizes neutrality and secondly pursues beauty.
Here I would like to talk about some points worth paying attention to when doing activities and reading the version yourself.
First, do not use more than three main colors for an event display. Emphasis on brightness
simple.
The second is that the upper and lower frames of the event viewing page of our Sayuri site are red, and the upper frame has
Sayuri activity board six different colors of Chinese fonts. When we were doing the activity board
Establish the framework first and then add to it. This way will not cause the overall color matching to be inconsistent and cause problems.
The existence of question three. This was taught by senior ahQQ back then.
Once again, the specifications for the activity viewing page did not meet the requirements. Everyone on our site’s Five Elements activity viewing page noticed it. But
It is often the case that the width is too long or too short. Generally, the system activity viewing framework is used as the basis.
Leave a half-width character space or a whole character space on the left and right.
At the end of the article, I would like to specifically praise fosmile for her two activity readings and one
The publication is really great. I hope everyone can learn more from her in the future. When painting, you not only need to draw more but also read more.
Know how to absorb the essence of others and use it for yourself.
hold on to only that and
One year old for Zeng Xing
Only the moon excerpts and
long fetch treasure
long film
river piece
Pan shellfish
boat shell
゜
like water
*
fleeting years
ps Everyone should develop a good habit when painting in the future, that is, put your name in the painting. If you are afraid of the impact,
I chose black as the color of the picture. This not only respects my own creation but also makes it convenient for friends who can learn from it.
xuhuiru@ASCIIArt
2004.11.11Southern Lily