发信人: dntx (冬鸟听雪), 信区: ASCIIArt
标 题: Re: all your life span is in FamilyLife(by南大scia
发信站: BBS 大话西游站 (Wed Sep 5 12:29:40 2001)
妇产 ﹃ ∩ ╔╗ ╲\/╱ ███████◤ ◢◤ ﹃
家 █ 哇/ \ ◢◤◢◤ ◣ ╩╩ ◣ ◥◤ █ ◢ ◢█◢◤ 哇
庭 ███ 哇▌█ ▋▋▋ █ ◢◣__ ◢◤◥◣ █ 光荣退休█ ███◢
生 █ ﹄▌█ ▋▋▋ █ ◥◣◢◤ █◢█████ █ 哇
活 止步 ▌█ ▋▋▋◤ ◥ ◥◤ ◤ █◢ ﹄
The Arrow of Time >>>>>>━━━━━━━━━━━━◆ Will NEVER Go Back
很有创意的一幅作品,其构思是最值得欣赏的一点。
用几个代表性的物品表现丰富的人生,具有很强的概括力,
两个 [哇哇] 前后对应,喜欢哲学思考的人不难从中体会出一些哲学道理。
一句 The Arrow of Time Will NEVER Go Back
是整幅作品的点睛之笔,是智者对人生的哲学思考。
从技术上讲,每一个小物品也都有许多精妙之处。
那几本书是最吸引我的地方,请特别注意书脊处的立体刻画,
效果很不错,体现了作者对字符运用的娴熟技巧。
奶瓶瓶体部分靠明暗形成的立体效果相当精彩,黑白色比别的
色要多一些明暗效果,充分利用可表现一些相当不错的效果。
箱子上那个提环横跨绿蓝两种背景,是需要精心构思与安排的。
那个露出一个角的纸构思也不错,增加了作品的生动性。
奖章构形十分逼真,十字架的立体效果也很棒。
这幅作品的小缺点也有一些。
"妇产止步"点明了主题,但据我所知,不会只写这几个字
改为"妇产科,男士止步"可能更为真实一些(hehe,有点吹毛求疵了)
受可用字符限制,瓶嘴部分有点缺陷。
奖章的立体效果感觉有点问题
光荣退休的框太厚,不如去掉立体效果可能会好些
十字架不合中国国情,改为墓碑就能做到中西兼容了
时间之箭的箭头部分造型不太好,不过受必须是单个字符的限制,
可能也很难找到更好的字符来表现了。
所有物品都有底色,呈四方形,整体效果上很整齐,但也有一
点呆板的感觉,如果去掉底色可能会使作品更生动灵活一些,
也方便一些细节处理,如瓶嘴部分刻画,书籍的表现效果等。
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Title: Re: all your life span is in FamilyLife by Nanda scia
Sending station: BBS Westward Journey Station Wed Sep 5 12:29:40 2001
Obstetrics and gynecology
Home Wow Wow
Court wow honorable retirement
raw wow
live stop
The Arrow of Time >>>>>> Will NEVER Go Back
A very creative piece of work. The concept is the most worthy of appreciation.
Using a few representative objects to express a rich life has strong generalization power.
The two [Wow] correspond to each other. People who like philosophical thinking can easily understand some philosophical principles.
The Arrow of Time Will NEVER Go Back
It is the finishing touch of the whole work and a wise man’s philosophical thinking on life.
Technically speaking, every small item also has many subtleties
Those books are what attract me the most. Please pay special attention to the three-dimensional carvings on the spines.
The effect is very good and reflects the author's skillful use of characters.
The three-dimensional effect created by light and dark on the body of the bottle is quite wonderful. Black and white are better than others.
The color should have more light and dark effects. If fully utilized, some pretty good effects can be achieved.
The carrying ring on the box spans the green and blue backgrounds, which requires careful conception and arrangement.
The idea of the paper with one corner exposed is also good, adding to the vividness of the work.
The configuration of the medal is very realistic and the three-dimensional effect of the cross is also great
There are also some minor shortcomings in this work.
"Maternity stop" highlights the theme, but as far as I know, it won't just write these few words.
Changing it to "Obstetrics and Gynecology, only for men" might be more realistic. Hehe, that's a bit nit-picky.
Limited by available characters, the mouth of the bottle is slightly defective
There is something wrong with the three-dimensional effect of the medal.
The frame of Glorious Retirement is too thick. It might be better to remove the three-dimensional effect.
The cross is not suitable for China's national conditions. Changing it to a tombstone will make it compatible with both Chinese and Western styles.
The shape of the arrow part of the Arrow of Time is not very good, but it is restricted by the fact that it must be a single character.
It may be difficult to find better characters to express
All items have a background color and are square in shape. The overall effect is very neat, but there is also a
It feels a bit dull. If you remove the background color, it might make the work more lively and flexible.
It also facilitates the processing of some details, such as the depiction of the mouth of the bottle, the performance effect of the book, etc.