发信人: dntx (冬鸟听雪), 信区: ASCIIArt
标 题: Re: egypt(by 水木清华 Iamppkl)
发信站: BBS 大话西游站 (Mon Jun 10 19:41:33 2002)
【 在 flubber (跳跳马) 的大作中提到: 】
: 绝!绝!
: 衣裙纹理沿袭了iamppkl一贯的特长。
: 头发上的罗马数字非常适合表现埃及式发型的纹理。
这一点是整幅作品最为精妙的地方,一下就表现出了埃及的特色。
: 背景使用了“朦胧”字符,恰如其分地表现了埃及文字的神秘感
: 还有一个小地方很显匠心,那就是手上生命之符“安克架”。
: 和前几幅作品相比,这幅的动作稍僵硬一些,
: 不过正符合埃及绘画的特点,古埃及绘画和雕塑中的人物都比较僵硬。
: Iamppkl最大的特点就是,有所取亦有所舍。
: 不追求轮廓的完整,大胆地舍弃,留空白,反而给人以完整的印象。
感觉图象上部的背景还是太复杂了点,精减一下可能会更平衡些。
: 项链感觉做的不是很好,比较乱。
埃及的项链就是很复杂的,我觉得做得还不错。
头顶饰物与头发结合得不太好,有点影响整个头形。
(不过可能受字符限制,也许没有更好的办法了)
还有眼睛觉得做得不太好,使人物缺乏神韵,
印象中埃及画中人的眼睛都是大大的。
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Title: Re: egypt by 水木青华 Iamppkl
Sending station: BBS Westward Journey Station Mon Jun 10 19:41:33 2002
mentioned in flubber's masterpiece:
: Absolutely
: The texture of the dress follows iamppkl’s consistent specialty
: Roman numerals on hair are perfect for expressing the texture of Egyptian hairstyles
This is the most exquisite part of the whole work. It immediately shows the characteristics of Egypt.
: The background uses hazy characters, which appropriately expresses the mystery of Egyptian writing.
: There is another small place that shows great ingenuity, that is the talisman of life on the hand, An Kejia.
: Compared with the previous works, the movements in this one are slightly stiffer.
: But it is in line with the characteristics of Egyptian painting. The characters in ancient Egyptian paintings and sculptures are relatively stiff.
: The biggest feature of Iamppkl is that there are things to take and things to give.
: Don’t pursue the completeness of the outline, boldly abandon it and leave blank space, but give people a complete impression.
I feel like the background in the upper part of the image is still a bit too complex. It might be more balanced by reducing it.
: I feel like the necklace is not very well made and is quite messy.
Egyptian necklaces are very complicated. I think they are quite well made.
The accessories on the head don't combine well with the hair, which somewhat affects the overall head shape.
But it may be limited by characters. Maybe there is no better way.
I also feel that the eyes are not well done, making the characters lack charm.
In my impression, the eyes of people in Egyptian paintings are all big.