发信人: Gatchaman (科学忍者队), 信区: ANSI
标 题: Re: [转载]上元之夜 by L4KevinX
发信站: 日月光华 (2010年03月11日11:25:25 星期四), 站内信件
上半部的氛围特好,
想当然尔是由于建筑物边缘的白线。
不过下半部也是不可偏废的,不然就过于单调了,
个人觉得下半部可以将底下的地面或影子(?)集中成圆形,
绘制成为灯笼所发出的光线即可,
再强调人物的影子部分,就是一幅很棒很完整的作品了。
【 在 Castellio (percyshelley|Right to Heresy) 的大作中提到: 】
: 【 以下文字转载自 ANSI 精华区 】
: 【 原文由 Allosaur 所发表 】
: 看过的人大部分都说“上半部分好”
: 并54了下半部分的拧巴小人
: 此图用作bbs天使之城元宵节热点
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Sender: Gatchaman Science Ninja Team, message area: ANSI
Title: Re: [Repost] Shangyuan Night by L4KevinX
Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua Thursday, March 11, 2010 11:25:25, site mail
The atmosphere in the first half is very good
Of course it's because of the white line on the edge of the building
However, the second half cannot be neglected, otherwise it will be too monotonous.
Personally, I think the lower half can concentrate the ground or shadow underneath into a circle.
Just draw it as the light emitted by the lantern
If you emphasize the shadow part of the character, it will be a great and complete work.
In Castellio percyshelley Right to Heresy's masterpiece:
: The following text is reproduced from the ANSI essence area
: Originally published by Allosaur
: Most people who have watched it say that the first half is good
: And 54 the lower half of the twisted villain
: This picture is used as a hotspot for the bbs City of Angels Lantern Festival
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