发信人: robinpb (罗宾铅,经中仔,隐于朝。), 信区: ANSI
标 题: 一幅ansi的评论 Z
发信站: 日月光华站 (Tue Nov 20 22:33:46 2001) , 站内信件
竹&梅(by 暨南园 seasonyl)
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║ 闻 山 人 苦 ║ ║╭╯ 支 偏 朵 梅 ║
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发信人: dntx (冬鸟听雪), 信区: ASCIIArt
标 题: Re: 竹&梅(by 暨南园 seasonyl)
发信站: BBS 大话西游站 (Tue Nov 20 13:43:02 2001)
左边的竹做得相当不错,颜色清淡怡人,画面清新雅致,构图小巧明快。
竹子挺拔笔直的造型与简洁大方的"竹"字构成了画面稳定的格局,配以精
巧的竹叶、活泼的楷体,使画面更显生动。
右边的梅字造型颇有创意,只是整体配色过于暗淡,画面元素不易分清,
构图上没有稳定元素,使画面整体缺乏支撑主体,以致有点散乱的感觉。
发信人: sunup (伽叶), 信区: ASCIIArt
标 题: Re: 竹&梅(by 暨南园 seasonyl)
发信站: BBS 大话西游站 (Tue Nov 20 20:41:08 2001)
梅花多以曲为美
单作者显然夸大了这一点
想做到满树繁华或者虬龙飞舞的意境
其时可以考虑加入底部坚实的树干
另外梅字的书写没有达到竹字的那个高度
尤其是偏旁:木,
欣赏那边的竹子
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Sender: robinpb Robin lead Jing Zhongzai Hidden in the North, message area: ANSI
Title: A review of ansi Z
Sending station: Sun and Moon Guanghua Station Tue Nov 20 22:33:46 2001, station mail
Bamboo&Plum by Jinanyuan seasonyl
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Song Night Resentment Bamboo Most Annoyed One
Also Jing He Zhi Gao Ren Yi Zhi
Wen Shanren's bitter branch favors plum blossoms
Empty resentment in flowers
Sender: dntx Winter Bird Listens to the Snow, message area: ASCIIArt
Title: Re: Bamboo&Plum by Jinanyuan seasonyl
Sending station: BBS Westward Journey Station Tue Nov 20 13:43:02 2001
The bamboo on the left is quite well made, the color is light and pleasant, the picture is fresh and elegant, and the composition is small and bright.
The tall and straight shape of bamboo and the simple and elegant character "bamboo" form a stable pattern in the picture.
The clever bamboo leaves and lively regular script make the picture more vivid
The shape of the plum character on the right is quite creative, but the overall color scheme is too dim and the elements of the picture are difficult to distinguish.
There are no stable elements in the composition, which makes the whole picture lack a supporting subject and makes it feel a bit scattered.
Sender: sunup Jiaye, message area: ASCIIArt
Title: Re: Bamboo&Plum by Jinanyuan seasonyl
Sending station: BBS Westward Journey Station Tue Nov 20 20:41:08 2001
Plum blossoms are mostly beautiful because of their music
The single author obviously exaggerated this
Want to achieve the artistic conception of flourishing trees or flying dragons?
At this time, you can consider adding a tree trunk with a solid bottom
In addition, the writing of the plum character does not reach the height of the bamboo character.
Especially the radical wood
Admire the bamboo over there
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C. Mobility
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