发信人: parr (哗啦。。), 信区: ASCIIArt
标 题: Re: 淡蓝调——很爱很爱你（初稿）
发信站: BBS 大话西游站 (Sun Feb 15 14:08:20 2004), 站内
钦佩之情难以言表。。。
以前就挺喜欢你的画，很随意，真实，感觉上像速写
在演奏会后，三副平移的特写后面，与下面的连接不太好，
情绪转的太快了，
能再有一幅就好了，多一个渐隐的画面，或者就放一屏全黑
Sender: parr Wow, message area: ASCIIArt
Title: Re: Light Blues I love you very much, first draft
Sending station: BBS Westward Journey Station Sun Feb 15 14:08:20 2004, within the station
The admiration is beyond words
I really liked your paintings before. They were very casual and real. They felt like sketches.
After the concert, behind the three panning close-ups, the connection to the bottom is not very good.
Emotions change too quickly
It would be nice to have one more picture, one more fade-out picture, or just make the screen completely black.
