Sender: qqzz 9922, Area: ANSI Title: Comment Waiting... by blue starry sky dawn Z Sending station: Riyue Guanghua Station Wed Jan 9 21:36:38 2002, site mail Sender: dntx Winter Bird Listens to the Snow, message area: ASCIIArt Title: Re: Waiting... by blue star dawn Sending station: BBS Westward Journey Station Tue Jan 8 19:21:46 2002 The lighting effect of the street lights is quite good and very creative, which well sets off the artistic conception of the picture. The well-structured house and ground provide a stable compositional framework At the same time, the random snowflakes and uneven snow in the sky make the picture more lively. Although the work is small, it is well made, well matched and very delicate. You can consider extending the picture a little longer to make the picture elements looser and freer. The boy's figure under the streetlight is a bit awkward. It might be better if he becomes slimmer and his head is straightened. If the road surface and snow are painted in the same color, it may have a more integrated aesthetic. wait Not just the night There is still hope Modification: qqzz modified this article on Jan 9 21:38:45 [FROM: 10.83.2.50] Source: Sun and Moon Guanghua Station bbs.fudan.edu.cn [FROM: 10.83.2.50]