发信人: coollizard (爱在蜥元前@CSD鳞妖), 信区: ASCIIArt
标 题: Re: 写了三个字
发信站: 鼓浪听涛 (Thu Jun 16 22:30:26 2005), 站内
水你写的那个不错了
研究了下flubber的字体我觉得有几个特色
他的笔划并不是全部都画出来的,更多的是相互遮盖形成层次感
而且基本是右边盖过左边,下边盖过上边
所以我把晶字右下角的日字向左扩张了,把左边的日盖的多些
这样更有层次感
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宫字我觉得宀的那一点用叶子代替不好呵呵,个人觉得了。
所以我换了直接笔划,不过弄了俩版本,其实也不是特别满意了。
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另外说一下,你原来写的三个字风格不是很统一了,特别是在细节上。
比如四个角上,哪儿该用直角哪儿该用弯角。原来的三个字就有弯有直
倒不是说一定要哪个角用弯的,但是在同一个作品里的字风格一定要一致
比如你的水字就是只有右下角用圆弧
那么后俩字也统一右下角圆弧 这样会显得整齐一些
Sender: coollizard Ai Zai Yuan Qian @CSD Scale Demon, message area: ASCIIArt
Title: Re: Wrote three words
Sending site: Gulangtingtao Thu Jun 16 22:30:26 2005 , within the site
Shui, what you wrote is pretty good.
After studying the font of flubber, I think it has several characteristics.
Not all of his strokes are painted, but more of them cover each other to create a sense of layering.
And basically the right side covers the left side, and the bottom side covers the top side.
So I expanded the sun character in the lower right corner of the crystal character to the left and covered the sun character on the left more
This makes it more layered
I don’t think it’s good to use leaves instead of the word “Gong” for the character “宀”. Personally, I think so.
So I changed to direct strokes, but after doing two versions, I’m actually not particularly satisfied with it either.
In addition, the style of the three words you originally wrote is not very consistent, especially in the details.
For example, among the four corners, where should we use right angles and where should we use curved corners? The original three characters include curved and straight.
It’s not that you have to use curved corners, but the style of the characters in the same work must be consistent.
For example, your water character only has an arc in the lower right corner.
Then the last two characters should also be unified with the arc in the lower right corner. This will make it look neater.