Sender: flubber hopping vault horse, message area: ASCIIArt Title: Re: Exercise 04 06 11 Sword Dance by windream@smth Sending station: BBS Westward Journey Tue Jun 15 21:37:02 2004, forwarded The hairstyle is great and the entire character dynamic is expressed concisely. The hands and feet are more freehand. I don’t think you need to pursue details too much. This fits the style of sketching very well. The only flaw is that the character's center of gravity is slightly off. When one leg is independent, the hip will shift toward the supporting leg The center of gravity is on the vertical line of the support point