发信人: Castellio (percyshelley|Right to Heresy), 信区: ANSI_Train02
标 题: [薇薇]missher的指点
发信站: 日月光华 (2010年07月10日08:32:45 星期六), 站内信件
作者 missher (千古冬蝶,万世凄绝) 站内 A_MapleFish
标题 Re: [闲聊]我画的薇薇
时间 Fri Jul 9 23:28:19 2010
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※ 引述《percyshelley (can spring be far behin)》之铭言∶
> 最近想画一个系列,其中一幅和你的旧作撞图了 XP
> 于是发过来厚著脸皮讨教,惭愧惭愧
> 这幅图对我来说超难的,斜脸+大眼睛+头发光影+小鸭子的细节处理,很多地方都
> 很不满意 :(
> 对了,薇薇的衣服是参考了你的配色,才定为粉色的,bow//
在 ONE PIECE 里 薇薇确实是不太好画的一个角色
我自己画过的几幅也不甚满意
要画薇薇会挑这张而撞图也属正常 没人规定画过的就不能画 :X
撞图了就把它画得更好或是多画几幅该角色吧 没什么 :)
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撇开细节不提
一眼望去,脸型轮廓就先出了大问题 (下巴 耳朵)
您可以用手把我说的这部份先遮起来感觉一下
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是否遮起来反而感觉好多了?
那么这部份就得先作修正,修好之后再来针对细节处理不够好的地方作微调
系列?
如果系列的边框是全部采用相同的悬赏图边
或许随自己意思重新设计过会更好些
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就角色脸部 我凭感觉随意地简略修了一下
不过这只能作为参考 仍不能定形修改 还得继续修正才是 这就靠您自己了 :)
(其他细节我就不动了 :X)
上发部份仍略嫌薄了点 需要再加厚
但这仍属小处 有个较为严重的地方 就是脸型斜拉了
若原本是 | . 变成 |
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要修正将会牵动很多地方需要跟著调整 这就看您自己的意愿了 :X
偷懒而将错就错也无不可
就看是要 该角色的特征有点出来且画面还算ok 就好
还是要 精准精确地呈现该角色原有的味道 了 :)
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Sender: Castellio percyshelley Right to Heresy, Area: ANSI Train02
Title: [Weiwei] missher’s advice
Sending station: Sun and Moon Guanghua July 10, 2010 08:32:45 Saturday, in-site mail
Author missher Eternal Winter Butterfly Eternal Misery Site A MapleFish
Title Re: [Chat] I drew Weiwei
Time Fri Jul 9 23:28:19 2010
Quote percyshelley can spring be far behin
> I recently wanted to draw a series, and one of the paintings collided with your old work XP
> So I sent it here to shamelessly ask for advice. I feel ashamed.
> This picture is very difficult for me. The slanted face, big eyes, light and shadow on the hair, and the detail processing of the little duck are all wrong in many places.
> Very dissatisfied:
> By the way, Weiwei’s clothes were chosen as pink based on your color bow bow
In ONE PIECE, Weiwei is indeed a difficult character to draw.
I'm not very satisfied with the few paintings I've done myself.
It’s normal for Weiwei to choose this picture when she wants to draw it, and it’s a different picture. No one stipulates that you can’t draw something you’ve drawn before :X
If it conflicts with the drawing, just draw it better or draw a few more drawings of the character. It doesn’t matter:
Leave aside the details
At first glance, there are big problems with the face contour: chin and ears.
You can cover the part I mentioned with your hands to feel it.
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Do you feel better if you cover it up?
Then this part needs to be corrected first. After that, fine-tuning can be done to the areas where the details are not handled well enough.
series
If the borders of the series are all using the same bounty map border
Maybe it would be better to redesign it as you like
As for the character's face, I lightly retouched it based on my feeling.
However, this can only be used as a reference, and it cannot be finalized and modified. You have to continue to modify it. This is up to you:
I won’t touch the other details :X
The upper part is still a bit thin and needs to be thickened.
But this is still a minor issue. There is one more serious issue, which is that the face shape is stretched diagonally.
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Correction will affect many places and need to be adjusted accordingly. It depends on your own wishes :X
It’s okay to be lazy and make mistakes
It just depends on whether the characteristics of the character are a little bit obvious and the picture is OK.
It is still necessary to accurately and accurately present the original flavor of the character:
The glass cup refers to Wut’s works へ
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