发信人: Gatchaman (科学忍者队), 信区: ANSI
标 题: Re: 浪迹天涯
发信站: 日月光华 (2010年04月02日14:41:19 星期五), 站内信件
构图和意境皆属上乘,
和原图是不太相同的氛围,比原图好上许多,
看得出是纯手工的,
只是第一眼不太容易看明白内容,但应该是视点的缘故。
座位上的铆钉可以不用刻意强调;
主体复杂,背景越简单越好;
不必急于修改,可先放上一阵子,自己再回头检视。
【 在 Castellio (percyshelley|Right to Heresy) 的大作中提到: 】
: 真是没信心修改下去了,
: 大家一定要轻拍。。。
: btw 能看出是什么东西么? =,=
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※ 来源:·日月光华 bbs.fudan.edu.cn·[FROM: 122.116.241.*]
Sender: Gatchaman Science Ninja Team, message area: ANSI
Title: Re: Wandering around the world
Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua Friday, April 2, 2010 14:41:19, site mail
The composition and artistic conception are both excellent
It has a different atmosphere than the original picture. It is much better than the original picture.
It can be seen that it is purely handmade
It’s just that it’s not easy to understand the content at first glance, but that’s probably because of the perspective.
There is no need to emphasize the rivets on the seat
The subject is complex and the background is as simple as possible
There is no need to rush to make changes. You can leave it for a while and then review it yourself.
In Castellio percyshelley Right to Heresy's masterpiece:
: I really don’t have the confidence to make any changes.
: Everyone must pat it gently
: btw can you tell what it is?
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