发信人: windream (0024·2004·思念是一种饼), 信区: ANSI
标 题: Re: [提高]第三章作业 by move
发信站: 日月光华 (2007年08月09日20:18:34 星期四), 站内信件
move童鞋在作品里很好滴写出了自己对于move介个id意境的体会!其实我的理解,本章
的作业虽然是以id为题,但不应该只是表现id本身,写出id的故事也是很好的视角!
不足的地方,山的形状太规则了,还有周边的高亮色块显得有点乱,用低亮就好呀..
比如稍微改了一下:
┃ / シ シ \ ゞ ゞ シ ╲ 动 ┃
┃▂▂▁ ▁▁▂▃▄▅▅▅▄▃▂▁ ▁▁▂▃▄▃▄▂▄▂▄▅▆██ 。 ┃
┃~~ ~~ ~ ~~ ~~~~~ ~~~ ~~~ 万 ┃
┃ ~ ~~~~ ~ ~~ ~~ ~ ◢◣ ╱| ~~~~~ 物 ┃
┃~~ ~ ~~ ~ ██ (|┣╱ | ~~~~~ 皆 ┃
┃ ~ ~~ ~ ~ ~~~ ██ █ | 动 ┃
┃~~ ~~~~ ~ ● ~ ████████ | ~~~~~~ ◢ , ┃
┃ ~~ ~~ ~~ ~ ~~ ~~ ~~| ~~~~~~ ◢██ 唯 ┃
┃~~ ~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~ ◢███ 动 ┃
┃ ~~ ~~ ~~ ~~ ~~ ~~ ~~ ~~ ~~ ~~ ~~ ◢█████ 不 ┃
┃ ◢██████ 动 ┃
┃ ㊣move 2007.08.09 。 ┃
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※ 修改:·windream 於 08月09日20:21:13 修改本文·[FROM: 220.234.228.139]
Sender: windream 0024 2004 Missing is a kind of cake, message area: ANSI
Title: Re: [Improvement] Chapter 3 Homework by move
Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua Thursday, August 9, 2007 20:18:34, site mail
Move Children's Shoes has very well written about his own experience of the artistic conception of move introduced in his work. In fact, my understanding of this chapter is
Although the assignment is based on ID, it should not just express the ID itself. Writing the story of the ID is also a good perspective.
The shortcomings are that the shape of the mountain is too regular and the surrounding highlighted color blocks look a bit messy. Just use low brightness...
For example, slightly changed
シ シ ゞ ゞ シ move
Ten thousand
thing
all
move
only
move
No
move
㊣move 2007.08.09
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