发信人: Saule (旋转的指南针·没有终点的旅行者), 信区: ANSI
标 题: Re: [组七]第三章作业 by Essien
发信站: 日月光华 (2007年08月09日19:14:15 星期四), 站内信件
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╱ re Essien: ╲
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╱ 1,ansi作品好的方面我就不说啦,直接挑刺: ╲
│ 第一个问题字符的选用。发现你基本上就是一个字符 │
│ 一种颜色画一个部分,会对形象的塑造造成局限。 │
│ 比如你的椰树(是椰树吧。。。)叶子的部分都使用 │
│ ∴,可以考虑除了它外,用∵∴∷·‥:之类的,可以 │
│ 表现枝叶的不同粗细。还有就是可以用同一颜色的明暗 │ ╭╮
│ 表现远近,使作品层次丰富。比如:用深浅不同的蓝色 │ ╰╯
│ 表现海的距离感,用不同深浅的海鸟表现天空的空间感 │╭╮
│ 等等。 │╰╯
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│ 2,并排倒置的fterm眼眶部分有问题,舌头上多了两条 │╭─╮ ╭╮
╲ 黑线诶= =||||| 基座也有小问题 \ (^^) ╰╯
╲ 并排的fterm屏幕四角错误。 ╱ \ ) (( )
╲ 可以自己再改改 ╱ ╰╯) )︶
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Sender: Saule Rotating Compass Traveler without End, Sending Area: ANSI
Title: Re: [Group 7] Chapter 3 Assignment by Essien
Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua Thursday, August 9, 2007 19:14:15, site mail
re Essien:
1. I won’t talk about the good aspects of Ansi’s works. I will just criticize them.
The first problem is the selection of characters. I found that you are basically one character.
Painting one part with one color will cause limitations in shaping the image.
For example, your coconut tree is a coconut tree. All parts of the leaves are used.
You can consider using it in addition to something like that. Yes.
To express the different thicknesses of branches and leaves, you can also use light and dark colors of the same color.
Express distance and make the work rich in layers, such as using different shades of blue.
Express the sense of distance in the sea. Use seabirds of different shades to express the sense of space in the sky.
etc.
2. There is a problem with the orbital part of the side-by-side inverted fterm. There are two extra lines on the tongue.
Black line, there is also a small problem with the base.
Side-by-side fterm screen corners error
You can change it yourself
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