发信人: windream (0024·2004·思念是一种饼), 信区: ANSI
标 题: Re: [提高]第四章作业 by BOneFiveER
发信站: 日月光华 (2007年08月13日20:09:51 星期一), 站内信件
组长童鞋彻底打消了我一瓶瓶复制作业的念头=,=
看得出组长童鞋对于竖线的了解已经很深入啦(强烈反对装囧参加培训的人!),但是
自re作品里面,我觉得因为是线条比较多的人物画,竖线运用的太多有时会显得毛毛的
,反而不如用斜线和折线呢,比如男生的袖子。另外也要注意小竖线和其他线条的接合
,像女方裙子下摆的地方一排没有倾斜的线中间有一节凸出来...总觉得怪怪的。下摆么
,好像白娘子水漫金山的时候吧,huhu =,=
忘了说灌水系列了,这样放在一起看很立体感啊...希望翻新出更多花样来哈哈
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※ 修改:·windream 於 08月13日20:11:12 修改本文·[FROM: 220.234.228.139]
Sender: windream 0024 2004 Missing is a kind of cake, message area: ANSI
Title: Re: [Improvement] Chapter 4 Homework by BOneFiveER
Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua Monday, August 13, 2007 20:09:51, site mail
The team leader's shoes completely gave up my idea of copying the assignments one by one.
It can be seen that the team leader has a deep understanding of vertical lines. I strongly object to people who pretend to be embarrassed to participate in the training, but
In Re's works, I think because it is a figure painting with a lot of lines, too many vertical lines can sometimes look fluffy.
Instead, it’s better to use diagonal lines and folded lines, such as boys’ sleeves. Also, pay attention to the connection between small vertical lines and other lines.
Like the hem of the woman's skirt, there is a protruding section in the middle of a row of non-sloping lines... I always feel weird about the hem?
It’s like when the white lady flooded the golden mountain, huhu,
I forgot to mention the irrigation series. It looks very three-dimensional when put together like this... I hope to refurbish it with more patterns, haha
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