发信人: AnsiEditor (史上最华丽扫把), 信区: ANSI
标 题: Re: [提高]第五章作业 by jingee
发信站: 日月光华 (2007年08月17日22:24:04 星期五), 站内信件
jingee童鞋重新做了一块上一次的作业呢,态度很好泥~而且对于色块的理解也正确了k
aka,不过那个星星...特别是颜色上...还可以多斟酌.....
初级班的第二题其实我的理解是自己来拼紫霞体啦..否则不是成了涂色练习?而且最后
一个字没有对齐哦=.=捏出去打~既然已经尝试修改了,不如自己尝试拼一拼啦,嗯。
提高班作业大家怎么都选择拼字。。。仍然是风格统一的问题,比如mm那个符号用进来
显得很突兀的,最好不要混用。另外。。。jingee童鞋这里面不仅有错字,还有别字啊
囧rz。。。是故意的么。。。。
最后两题偷懒变一题了。。不过字拼的很干净整洁,很不错呀!网。。一时想不到好的
主意,但是这样也很好呀,毕竟不是很工整的楷体宋体之类,这样觉得胖胖的很滑稽的
样子@@做成进版主题鲜明,但是下面挖空两条写字,显得有点可惜呢@@
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Title: Re: [Improvement] Chapter 5 Homework by jingee
Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua Friday, August 17, 2007 22:24:04, site mail
Jingee Children's Shoes has re-did a piece of the last homework. The attitude is very good, and the understanding of color blocks is also correct.
aka But that star...especially the color...can be considered more...
In fact, my understanding of the second question in the beginner class is that you have to spell Zixia Ti by yourself...otherwise it becomes a coloring exercise and in the end
One word is not aligned. Pinch it out and type it. Since you have already tried to modify it, why not try to spell it out yourself?
Why do everyone choose spelling for the improvement class homework? It is still a matter of unified style. For example, the symbol mm is used.
It seems very abrupt. It’s best not to mix them together. In addition, there are not only typos but also other words in jingee children’s shoes.
囧rz Did this happen on purpose?
I was lazy and changed the last two questions into one question, but the wording and spelling are very clean and tidy, which is very good. I can't think of a good one at the moment.
Idea, but this is also very good. After all, it’s not a neat regular script or Song script. It makes me look fat and funny.
It looks like @@ the theme of the front page is clear, but it seems a bit pity to cut out two words at the bottom @@
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