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标 题: [组四]第五章作业 点评
发信站: 日月光华 (2007年08月18日02:38:41 星期六), 站内信件
JLee
J和L的上色有点问题,感觉不是很统一,两个字母的光源位置不一样,造成视觉上的差
异,其次,我觉得字母的形状有一点修改的地方,J的字母的那个勾没有表现出来,如果
要大小一致的话,J还需要稍微变一下型,精华区里有一套光源版的字母的,可以看一看
,并有自己的修改意见。
相比较而言,e写的比较简单了,不够有灵气,当然用这种方法是可以写出来的,不过字
符就不能用│︳等等了,需要用┌ ┐└ ┘,偶尔还要用-_等等,明显感觉出来这样的
转角比较省空间,可以自己尝试一下
紫霞体能够自己去写,我很开心,相比较直接用字库的同学,这样更好,本来是一个自
己体会写字的一个练习,直接用字库就失去意义了,不过紫霞体字库的出现还是带来了
相当大的方便的。
对了,新闻两个字不是规范的紫霞体,属于紫霞体的变体,紫霞体是6X6的格子,我觉得
根据教材中的讲解,写这两个字应该还是可以的,当然也可以很方便的找到这两个字的
紫霞体,对照一下,可以知道自己那部分笔画没有写清楚,当然字库里有一些字还是值
得斟酌的。至于变形的话,方法就更多了,根据作品,意境和目的可以充分发挥自己的
想象力,改变字的结构,大小或者笔画的延伸等等,这一些没有固定的套路,更需要自
己的不断尝试。写字的时候╭╮╰╯ ┌ ┐└ ┘交替使用可以显得活泼一些,不过╭╮
╰╯不是特别需要的话,个人觉得不宜太多。
philipa
最近几次作业都完成的质量很高,这次的字体也是写的很惊艳哪,自己的id,我觉得字
母A有些奇怪,H似乎前面字母的横线位置有些高了,其他的都ok~
紫霞体就不多说了,直宽体写的很不错,字体的简化和点缀都恰到好处,我也没有过多的
废话,赞!
cccyo
组长同学很认真负责地说~先赞一个!
自己手绘的作业问题主要在于大小显得不统一,感觉不是一个型号的,呵呵,光源和影
音的位置也不是很一致,不过上色的规律相信自己从字库中应该也可以找到一二了,就
不啰嗦了。
紫霞字体的那个修改不错,原来那个校写的比较囧。。。
至于上色的话,文中是为了看的清楚,所以左右,上下等上了不同的背景色,一般的作
品中颜色不宜过多,会显得杂乱。颜色的搭配后面会提到一些,不过更多的需要实际的
效果和自己的一些尝试。
ps:还有位童鞋很久缪交作业咯~ 加油哦~ 呵呵~
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Title: [Group 4] Chapter 5 Homework Comments
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JLee
There is a problem with the coloring of J and L. They don’t feel very uniform. The light source positions of the two letters are different, causing visual differences.
Secondly, I think the shape of the letters needs to be modified a little bit. The hook of the J letter is not shown. If
If the size is to be the same, J needs to be slightly changed. There is a set of light source version of the letters in the essence area. You can take a look.
and have their own modification opinions
Comparatively speaking, e is relatively simple to write, and it is not spirited enough. Of course, it can be written using this method, but the words
The talisman cannot be used. Wait. I need to use it. I still need to use it occasionally. Wait. It clearly feels like this.
Corners save space, you can try it yourself
I am very happy to be able to write Zixia style by myself. Compared with my classmates who directly use the font library, this is better. I am originally a self-taught person.
I have experienced an exercise in writing. It is meaningless to use the font library directly. However, the emergence of Zixia Ti font library has brought
Quite large and convenient
By the way, the word "news" is not the standard Zixia style. It is a variant of Zixia style. Zixia style is a 6X6 grid, I think.
According to the explanation in the textbook, it should be possible to write these two characters. Of course, it is also easy to find these two characters.
If you compare Zixia style, you can know which part of your strokes are not written clearly. Of course, there are some words in the font library that are still worth it.
You have to consider it. As for transformation, there are more methods. You can give full play to your own style according to the artistic conception and purpose of the work.
Imagination. Change the structure, size or extension of strokes, etc. There are no fixed routines for these, and more need to be done by yourself.
My constant attempts to use them alternately when writing can make it look more lively. However,
If it’s not particularly necessary, I personally think it shouldn’t be too much.
philipa
The quality of the recent assignments has been very high. The font this time is also very amazing. I think the font of my own ID is very good.
The mother A is a little strange. The horizontal line in front of H seems to be a little high. Everything else is fine.
I won’t say much about the Zixia style. The writing in the straight and wide style is very good. The simplification and embellishment of the font are just right. I don’t have too much.
Nonsense Like
cccyo
The group leader classmate said very seriously and responsibly, give me a thumbs up first
The main problem with my hand-painted work is that the sizes are not uniform and it feels like they are not of the same model. Haha. Light source and shadow.
The positions of the sounds are not very consistent, but I believe you can find out the coloring patterns from the font library.
Stop being verbose
The modification of the Zixia font is good, but the original proofreading is rather awkward.
As for coloring, the purpose of the article is to see clearly, so different background colors are used on the left, right, top and bottom. Generally speaking,
The product should not have too many colors, as it will appear cluttered. Color matching will be mentioned later, but more needs to be practical.
Effects and some of my own attempts
ps. There is also a kid who has been handing in his homework for a long time. Come on, hehe.
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