发信人: windream (0024·2004·妖蛾子), 信区: ANSI
标 题: Re: [提高]第七章作业 by gdnh
发信站: 日月光华 (2007年09月06日21:45:47 星期四), 站内信件
b2a这章其实我是没有发言权的了，不过就随便说一下个人的意见吧，这个图轮廓修改的
很好，特别是肚皮那部分，平滑多了，但是脚上面还有大bug可以改正。表情经过修正显
得俏皮和清楚多了，但是嘴巴。。。。不看原图地说一句，或许结合线条会更好吧？
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※ 来源:·日月光华 bbs.fudan.edu.cn·[FROM: 220.234.228.139]
Sender: windream 0024 2004 Yao Mozi, message area: ANSI
Title: Re: [Improvement] Chapter 7 Homework by gdnh
Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua Thursday, September 06, 2007 21:45:47, site mail
I actually have no say in this chapter of b2a, but I’ll just give my personal opinion. The outline of the picture has been modified.
Very good, especially the belly part, which is much smoother. But there are still big bugs on the feet that can be corrected. The expressions have been corrected to look better.
It's much more playful and clear, but the mouth is better if you say something without looking at the original picture. Maybe it would be better if you combined it with the lines.
Source: Sun and Moon Guanghua bbs.fudan.edu.cn [FROM: 220.234.228.139]
