发信人: KingIng (U will when u believe), 信区: ANSI
标 题: [组01] 第三章点评
发信站: 日月光华 (2007年12月31日03:03:32 星期一), 站内信件
很抱歉拖了这么久才点评
其他同学还是缪交作业唉 可能要到假期了吧 加油加油!~
第三章的作业是用Ansieditor画一幅图表现自己的ID
cherryfox同学直接用线条描绘了自己的id 整体感觉还可以
略微显得不是很流畅,虽然线条连接没有问题,但是有些弯曲似乎有点多余或者不是很
恰当,造成了稍显扭曲的视觉效果,毛刺也稍显多了一点,当然这也是一种风格,不过
这幅作品中反而给人带来了大小不一的感觉。其实可以简洁一点,下点功夫在其他空间
的处理上,让画面更充实。也可以用适当的方式将字母间联系,比如下面一副作品
feeling(by SaYoNaLa@ 水木清华站)
虽然字母略显的不是很好辨认,但是整体线条很流畅,布局也很好,风格也很统一,很
舒服。
╭───╮
│ ╰╯
╰╮
╭├─╮
││╰╯
││╭──╮
│││╭╮│ ╭╮
╰╯│╰┬╯─╮ ││
│ │╭╮│ ││
╰──╰─╯╭╮│╭╮
╰────╯╰╰╮ ╭─╮
╰──│─╯ │╮
││ ││││
╰╯ ╰╯││──╮
╰─╯╭╮│
╭╮ ╰─╯│
╰─────╯
当然关于字母的版本很多很多,每个人也有各自的喜好,但是一般都要照顾到整体画面
的风格,而适当的点缀有时也是必不可少的,比如写自己的id,可以加一点相关的元素
阿,比如cherry或者fox 或者是一些简单的字符,而颜色的话,简洁抑或华丽都是可取
的。精华区有很多字母方面的字体,不管是成套的还是零散的,可以自己去试着模仿着
写相关类型的字母。这个对于以后的大幅作品等等都是有帮助的~
【 在 KingIng (U will when u believe) 的大作中提到: 】
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: │ │ ╮ ╮ │
: ╭─╯ ╮ │ ╭─╯ ├─╮ ├─╮ ╮ ╭╯
: │ ├─┤ ├─ ├┬╯ ├┬╯ │ │
: ╰─╮ │ │ ╰─╮ │╰╮ │╰╮ ╰┬╯
: │ │ ╰╮ │ │ │ │
: │ │
: ╭─╯
: │ │
: ╭─╯ ╮ │
: .................(以下省略)
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Sender: KingIng U will when u believe , message area: ANSI
Title: [Group 01] Comments on Chapter 3
Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua December 31, 2007 03:03:32 Monday, site mail
Sorry it took so long to comment
Other students still have to hand in their homework. It may be the holidays. Come on, come on.
The assignment in Chapter 3 is to use Ansieditor to draw a picture to represent your ID.
Student cherryfox directly drew his ID with lines. The overall feeling is okay.
It doesn't look very smooth. Although there is no problem with the line connection, some bends seem a bit redundant or not very smooth.
Appropriate, resulting in a slightly distorted visual effect and a little more burrs. Of course, this is also a style, but
This work gives people the feeling of different sizes. In fact, it can be simpler and put more effort into other spaces.
In order to make the picture more substantial, you can also use appropriate methods to connect letters, such as the following work
feeling by SaYoNaLa@ Shuimu Tsinghua Station
Although the letters are slightly unclear and difficult to recognize, the overall lines are very smooth, the layout is also very good, and the style is very unified.
Comfortable
Of course, there are many versions of letters, and everyone has their own preferences, but generally the overall picture must be taken into consideration.
style, and appropriate embellishment is sometimes essential. For example, if you write your own ID, you can add some related elements.
Ah, such as cherry or fox or some simple characters. As for the color, it is suitable to be simple or gorgeous.
There are many letter fonts in the essence area. Whether they are in sets or scattered, you can try to imitate them yourself.
Write related types of letters. This will be helpful for future large-scale works, etc.
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