发信人: linzhihuan (BigHuan|卡尔马克思), 信区: ANSI
标 题: [转载][点评]第一组第七章作业CHERRYFOX
发信站: 日月光华 (2008年09月05日17:14:46 星期五), 站内信件
【 以下文字转载自 ANSI_Discuss 讨论区 】
【 原文由 linzhihuan 所发表 】
cherryfox童鞋本次的作业十分精彩,是值得表扬滴~~
首先说转图那个吧~
原图还是可以看出是经过了一番修改的,背景色以及整体颜色都经过了不同程度的修改
,个别地方还可以看出描边的痕迹。
但是个人不是很建议使用太复杂的图形,比如,这只野猪(是野猪吧。。。)的左半部分
,那个白色的光由于和游泳圈的白色重复,让人不容易看出是什么东西。鼻子部分的颜
色很复杂,也不适宜于直接转换。最好把可有可无的细节省去,或者后期改用比较简单
的元素。
虽然不推荐使用三角形,但是这幅图里面大概没什么办法了。。。。怨念。。。。
尝试着修改了一下:
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主要修改部分:
1,游泳圈下部的毛刺,是必须要修改掉的。为此,游泳圈黄色部分改用了暗色;
2,鼻子那里太复杂了,于是进行了简化;
3,嘴那里的线条和原图的位置不是很符合,进行了简单修改,可以注意几种上下线的运
用;
4,眼睛部分进行了小的修改,改变了目光方向;
5,以及几个无所谓的小地方。。。
至于“闪耀”那两个字,个人已经没有什么可以建议的啦~按照这样写下去就ok :)
cherryfox童鞋的作业总体来讲灰常的赞~~再接再厉^^
【 在 linzhihuan (BigHuan|卡尔马克思) 的大作中提到: 】
: 【 以下文字转载自 linzhihuan 的信箱 】
: 【 原文由 cherryfox 所发表 】
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Sender: linzhihuan BigHuan Karl Marx, message area: ANSI
Title: [Reprint][Comment] Group 1 Chapter 7 Assignment CHERRYFOX
Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua Friday, September 5, 2008 17:14:46, site mail
The following text is reproduced from the ANSI Discuss discussion forum
Originally published by linzhihuan
Cherryfox children's shoes did a wonderful job this time and deserve praise.
Let’s talk about the picture first.
It can still be seen that the original image has been modified. The background color and overall color have been modified to varying degrees.
Traces of strokes can also be seen in some places.
But I personally don’t recommend using graphics that are too complex. For example, this wild boar is the left half of a wild boar.
Because the white light overlaps with the white color of the swimming ring, it is difficult to see what it is. The color of the nose
Color is very complex and not suitable for direct conversion. It is best to omit unnecessary details or use it later to make it simpler.
Elements
Although it is not recommended to use triangles, there is probably nothing that can be done in this picture. I feel resentful.
Tried to modify it
Main modifications
1 The burrs on the lower part of the swimming ring must be modified. For this reason, the yellow part of the swimming ring is changed to a dark color.
2 The nose was too complicated, so I simplified it.
3. The lines on the mouth are not very consistent with the position of the original picture. Simple modifications have been made. You can pay attention to several operations of the upper and lower lines.
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4 The eyes have been slightly modified and the gaze direction has been changed.
5 and a few insignificant little places
As for the word "shine", I personally have nothing to suggest. Just write it down like this:
Overall, I really like the work of cherryfox children's shoes. Keep up the good work^^
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