发信人: daviddvd (迎接另一个晨曦), 信区: ANSI
标 题: [点评]毕业设计-第一组cherryfox
发信站: 日月光华 (2008年09月11日00:17:01 星期四), 站内信件
cherryfox也算是我们的好同学老邻居好伙伴了,经历了将近一年的培训终于取得了圆满
的成果,废话不多说,就这幅毕业设计做一些小小的点评
对于一幅ansi,最基本应当是作品的整体结构,cherryfox同学在这方面做得还是相当不
错的,荷花构型生动饱满。使用断续线条构型可以减少工作量,将一些不必要的细节省
去并且突出主体。
细部特征上还有一些地方有待于加强,对于线条的使用有待斟酌,比如说︳可以替换︴
,在一般的情况下。所以我们说一幅好的作品是修改出来的。
对于space |.| ,cherryfox同学看样子还是挺喜欢使用点点的,从最早的看板和活动宣
传,到zone2的“色盲检查表”,大概这就是你喜欢的风格吧。
另外还有一点要注意的细节,就是在AE中作画一般要空出一行,因为BBS中有状态栏:
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之类的东西会占掉一行。
杂七杂八说了一些,其实真正能在培训班学到的,你已经都掌握了。对于ansi,最重要
的是有一颗善于发现的心,以及不受约束的想象力,最后才是把思维投影到屏幕上的手
最后,恭喜你毕业。
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Sender: daviddvd Welcome another morning, message area: ANSI
Title: [Comment] Graduation Project Group 1 Cherryfox
Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua Thursday, September 11, 2008 00:17:01, site mail
cherryfox can be regarded as our good classmate, old neighbor and good partner. After nearly a year of training, we finally achieved success.
Achievements. Without further ado, let me make some small comments on this graduation project.
For an ansi, the most basic thing is the overall structure of the work. Cherryfox did a pretty good job in this aspect.
Wrong. The lotus flower configuration is vivid and full. Using intermittent line configuration can reduce the workload and save some unnecessary details.
Go and highlight the subject
There are still some areas that need to be strengthened in terms of detailed features. The use of lines needs to be considered. For example, they can be replaced.
Under normal circumstances, we say that a good work is modified
Regarding space. It seems that cherryfox students still like to use Diandian. From the earliest billboards and event announcements,
Color blindness checklist passed to zone2 Maybe this is the style you like.
Another detail that needs to be paid attention to is that when drawing in AE, you generally need to leave a blank line because there is a status bar in BBS.
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Something like that will take up a line
I talked about some miscellaneous things. In fact, you have already mastered everything you can really learn in the training class. The most important thing for ANSI is
What is important is a heart that is good at discovery and an unfettered imagination. Finally, it is the hands that project thoughts onto the screen.
Finally, congratulations on your graduation
In the masterpiece of linzhihuan BigHuan Karl Marx mentioned:
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What is needed is a broad mind. This is what we really want when we look up at the sky.
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