发信人: soulfox (找到该学的), 信区: ANSI
标 题: Re: [组03] 第二章作业 by EverLost
发信站: 日月光华 (2008年01月21日01:56:02 星期一), 站内信件
我实在是不好意思啊。。。托了有一个月了吧,都没给点评。。。
主要是太忙了,当然这也是借口。
我都拿到讨论版去讨论过了,也有点评了,就是没过来发文。。
好吧,
整个作业做的是非常的精美,设计的也很独特,两边的胶片式页面,也很经典,
做的也很仔细,色彩搭配也不错。透明色的实现设计的也很独具匠心。。
好,表扬说得差不多了,说说其他的吧:)
ANSI四个字母的叠加的创意不错,但四个字母其实还是略欠精致。。
我稍稍改了改,不过也只是个人意见啦
简化代码,既然BC都是32m,为啥C不合并?
规范代码的意义写的很不错:),我也说不了什么
那么走马灯,实现成功,不过没啥花头。。我们都是对你很高的期待哦。
咋能讨厌走马灯呢。。。呵呵,不过也是个人喜好啦。。
另外,代码上,你经过代码优化的软件了吧,ms不太好哦
尽管space的时候看是正确的,但上下键的时候就会丢失色块了。。。
所以那个软件慎用。倒是可以试试妖精雨jj的作品啦:)
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※ 来源:·日月光华 bbs.fudan.edu.cn·[FROM: 218.78.236.38]
Sender: soulfox found the subject, message area: ANSI
Title: Re: [Group 03] Chapter 2 Homework by EverLost
Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua January 21, 2008 01:56:02 Monday, site mail
I'm really sorry. I've been asking for it for a month, but I haven't given any comments yet.
Mainly because I'm too busy. Of course, this is also an excuse.
I took it to the discussion board to discuss it and made comments, but I didn’t come here to post anything.
All right
The entire work is very beautifully done and the design is also very unique. The film-style pages on both sides are also very classic.
The workmanship is also very careful, the color matching is also good, and the design of the transparent color is also very original.
Okay, that’s enough praise. Let’s talk about other things.
The superimposition of the four letters of ANSI is a good idea, but the four letters are actually a little lacking in refinement.
I changed it slightly, but it’s just my personal opinion.
Simplified code. Since BC is both 32m, why is C not merged?
The meaning of standardized code is very well written: I can’t say anything.
Then the revolving door will achieve success, but there will be no tricks. We all have high expectations for you.
How can you hate the revolving lantern? Haha, but that’s just a personal preference.
In addition, in terms of code, you have code-optimized software, right? ms is not very good.
Although it looks correct when pressing space, the color block will be lost when pressing the up and down keys.
So use that software with caution, but you can try Fairy Rain jj’s works:
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