发信人: soulfox (零四通信·我有我型|重感冒+发烧+拉肚子), 信区: ANSI
标 题: Re: 第三章作业 By EverLost
发信站: 日月光华 (2008年07月14日00:21:36 星期一), 站内信件
其实这个已经很好了。。。没什么好点评的额。。。= -
(先给自己这么久拖住没点评找借口~~)
好吧,先说第一个吧,用格式刷和画笔做一个ANSI,作者用了&和*,尽管我不是
很清楚为啥他选择了这两个符号,特别是&,不过整体效果还是不错了,当然这
是得表扬菠萝同学的鼠标画技术了~~哈哈。其实我想,菠萝同学以后也不会有
只用格式刷和画笔来做这种天真可爱涂鸦式的ANSI的必要了。。不过格式刷和画
笔倒是在各种ANSI作画中非常常用的哦,特别是格式刷,画笔嘛可以在一些随意
的涂抹中可以有比较好的应用,像作业中这种鼠标画估计比较少啦。通过这次作
业,我想菠萝同学对这两个工具的应用已经很熟悉了。
第二个作业,用AE画一幅图表现自己ID。这个算是表现得不错啦,everlost几个
字母和菠萝两个汉字都是自己拼的,恩,行数和列数都控制的不错,为什么说这
个呢?因为如果拼的字行数和列数比较小的话可以在更多的场合用到。everlost
这几个字母连在一起,可能是我们知道你id。。稍微有点难认啦,不过这也是你
的一种风格。菠萝两个字可能也是为了减少行数,做了不少精简,不过还是能够
一眼看出来是菠萝,几个弧线也不错,是自己的风格,黄绿两色搭配也正好。
再来说一说菠萝同学的框架吧。首先一个模仿游戏的格子,很漂亮,红白蓝的搭
配我个人是非常喜欢的,毕竟算是美术界公认的最美三色搭配了(如果没有记错
的话)。不过说说两个问题:1.整个作业框架颜色太多太杂,很眼花,“第三章”
用了绿白青,还有ANSI用了很多颜色,黄色的泡泡,还有红白蓝。。。太滥了。。
个人是比较倾向于所有颜色加起来在3个和3个以内的,不过也是个人喜好啦,毕
竟颜色搭配是非常重要的,不亚于构图等其他部分。2.就是元素过多了。。又很
乱了。。各种元素在一起ms没有一个重点,而且元素的风格都不甚统一,给人感
觉太杂了又。。momo
其实框架只是衬托出自己的作业,最好不要喧宾夺主,弄得不知道哪部分是作业,
哪部分是框架了。。。
以上只是自己的一些小小的意见和建议~~加油哦~~
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Sender: Soulfox Zero Four Communication I have my own type of severe cold, fever, diarrhea, message area: ANSI
Title: Re: Chapter 3 Homework By EverLost
Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua July 14, 2008 00:21:36 Monday, site mail
In fact, this is already very good. There is nothing to comment on.
First, let me make excuses for delaying my review for so long.
Okay, let’s talk about the first one first. Use Format Painter and Brushes to make an ANSI. The author used & and *, although I’m not
It's clear why he chose these two symbols, especially &, but the overall effect is still good, of course.
I have to praise Mr. Pineapple for his mouse drawing skills. Haha. In fact, I don’t think Mr. Pineapple will be able to do it in the future.
It is only necessary to use the Format Painter and the brush to create this innocent and cute graffiti-style ANSI. But the Format Painter and the Paintbrush
Pens are very commonly used in various ANSI paintings, especially format brushes. The brushes can be used in some random
It can be used better in painting. I guess there are relatively few mouse paintings like this one. Through this work
I think Mr. Pineapple is already very familiar with the application of these two tools.
The second assignment is to use AE to draw a picture to represent your own ID. This is a pretty good performance. Everlost has a few.
The letters and the two Chinese characters of pineapple are all spelled out by myself. Well, the number of rows and columns are well controlled. Why do you say this?
Because if the number of rows and columns of spelling words is relatively small, everlost can be used in more situations.
These letters are connected together. Maybe we know your ID. It’s a little hard to recognize, but this is you too.
A kind of style. The word "pineapple" may be a lot of simplification to reduce the number of lines, but it can still be done.
At first glance, it looks like a pineapple. The arcs are pretty good. It’s my own style. The yellow and green colors go well together.
Let’s talk about the framework of Pineapple Classmates. First, there is a grid that imitates the game. It is very beautiful, with red, white and blue combinations.
I personally like the combination very much. After all, it is considered the most beautiful combination of three colors in the art world. If I remember correctly
If so, let me talk about two issues: 1. The entire homework framework has too many colors and is very confusing. Chapter 3
I used green, white and blue and ANSI used a lot of colors, yellow bubbles and red, white and blue, too much.
Personally, I prefer that the sum of all colors should be within 3 or less, but it is also a personal preference.
After all, color matching is very important, no less than composition and other parts. 2. There are too many elements and it’s very
It's a mess. Various elements are put together without a focus. Moreover, the styles of the elements are not uniform, which gives people a sense of confusion.
I feel too complicated and momo
In fact, the framework is just to set off your own homework. It is best not to overwhelm the focus and make it unclear which part is the homework.
Which part is the frame?
The above are just some of my small opinions and suggestions. Come on!
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