发信人: Saule (没有终点的旅行者), 信区: ANSI
标 题: [组06]第八章作业点评
发信站: 日月光华 (2008年03月16日18:16:15 星期天), 站内信件
组长童鞋居然能够坚持到第八章。。。老师我很感动~~><~~
这个进版用色干净简洁,图片和文字结合很好地表现了版面的内容。不足之处在左下角
的文字,那个灰色的框子颜色显得不太协调,而且加了框显得画面左下密度很高,整幅
进版重心向左边倾斜,不太平衡。
请务必再接再厉~~就快毕业鸟~~~加油~
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┃南娱 302┃▎┴ ◥◤ 输飞了,投了吧 ㄟ 〃 ╮
╚┳━━┳╝▎┬ ╭ 你个菜鸟~ 乀 ○ ∮ ○ ○ ○へ逼住很大。 ╭─╯
┊ ┊ │his game ─╮ < ︶○/ \√/ ○||| ╰╮゛
欢 迎 光 临!▎╭─────╯ ▕┃<「 ▅ |V] ← 无语ing... ╭╯°
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※ 来源:·日月光华 bbs.fudan.edu.cn·[FROM: 10.85.2.138]
Sender: Saule Traveler without End, Sending Area: ANSI
Title: [Group 06] Chapter 8 Homework Comments
Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua March 16, 2008 18:16:15 Sunday, site mail
The team leader, Tong Xia, was able to persevere until Chapter 8. Teacher, I am very touched ><
This page uses clean and concise colors. The combination of pictures and text well expresses the content of the page. The shortcoming is in the lower left corner.
The color of the gray frame of the text seems uncoordinated, and the added frame makes it appear that the lower left side of the screen is very dense.
The center of gravity of the incoming plate is tilted to the left, which is unbalanced.
Please keep up your efforts and graduate soon. Come on!
Land Top... #%&*$@ Only psychological activities
Nanyu 302 lost, vote for it ㄟ
You're a newbie. You're so hard-pressed.
his game < ゛
Welcome < V] Speechless...
㊣saule
Source: Sun and Moon Guanghua bbs.fudan.edu.cn [FROM: 10.85.2.138]