发信人: JuliaFrank (小卡那), 信区: ANSI
标 题: 点评 by JuliaFrank
发信站: 日月光华 (2008年06月08日17:29:48 星期天), 站内信件
小o和b152都是大牛,就不多说了~ 有空也可以多看看精华区里其他前辈们的作品,许多
画法也很值得学习的。
“彷”字写得很好呀,比我的处女作好多了^^
其中,个人觉得“方”的一横的上沿处理得尤其不错,干净地解决了斜线的问题,而且
对整体影响不大。
但有些细节还是要再注意些,比如这一横的右下角。由于这个字其余部分都是简洁的单
线,如果在这个地方用双线的话,是不是略有不妥呢?^^ 另外,双人旁的最顶端是有字
符可以不留白的,所以,这个连上的效果是不是会好一点呢?
很期待你更多的线条作品~
附:这是我略作修改后的:
╭、 ___
︱ ╲ \ \
/ / / /
/ / ` ̄ ___
/ ╱ ╱ \
/ ∠ ╱ ̄ ̄ ,--ˊ
<___ ╲ --' | ╱
/ / ﹨ ╱ ︳ ︳_
/ /  ̄ │ |╱ ╲
/ / / ∕ ̄\ \
/ ╱ / ∕ ︱ |
/╱︱\ / ∕ / │
︱︱ / ∕ ___/ /
︱︱ /╱ ╲ ╱
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【 在 JuliaFrank (小卡那) 的大作中提到: 】
: 对ansi礼仪的看法:
: 虽然对其没有明确的法律规定,但随着bbs的不断发展完善,已经形成了一套成熟的礼
: 仪。每一件ansi作品都是画手心血的结晶.作为bbser的我们应该尊重其劳动成果,不作出
: 破坏ansi礼节的行为,并对他人的侵权行为作出提醒.
: 对ansi作者/作品的感想
: 1、soulfox的金陵十二钗(x-7-1-16-13-1):
: 伟大的前版大的作品是多么精妙,令人感受到ansi的无穷魅力。作为我个人,最喜欢利
: 用线条勾勒出的一幅幅美丽的图画,因此很喜欢soulfox大的许多作品,特别是这套金陵
: 十二钗。无论是整体的感觉,还是细节的表现,都令我印象深刻。
: 2、BOneFiveER(x-7-2-5)
: .................(以下省略)
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为罹难同胞默哀 ︵∵()
为罹难同胞默哀 ︶(/`╲
为美丽的祖国祈祷 _ \
为美丽的祖国祈祷 `﹀╲︳_
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※ 来源:·日月光华 bbs.fudan.edu.cn·[FROM: 10.85.2.200]
Sender: JuliaFrank , message area: ANSI
Title: Review by JuliaFrank
Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua June 8, 2008 17:29:48 Sunday, site mail
Xiaoo and b152 are both big names, so I won’t go into details. If you have time, you can also read more of the works of other seniors in the highlight section.
Painting is also worth learning
The handwriting is very good, much better than my debut ^^
Among them, I personally think that the upper edge of the horizontal line of the square is particularly well handled, and the problem of diagonal lines is neatly solved.
Little impact on the overall
But some details still need to be paid more attention to. For example, the lower right corner of this horizontal line, because the rest of the word is a simple single word.
Line: Wouldn’t it be a little inappropriate to use double lines in this place? ^^ In addition, there are words on the top next to the double lines.
The talisman can be left blank, so will the effect of this connection be better?
I’m looking forward to more line works from you
Attached, this is what I modified slightly
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In Julia Frank's masterpiece, it is mentioned:
: Opinions on ansi etiquette:
: Although there are no clear legal provisions on it, with the continuous development and improvement of BBS, a mature set of etiquette has been formed.
: Yi Every ansi work is the crystallization of the artist’s hard work. As bbsers, we should respect the fruits of their labor and not make any
: Behavior that violates ANSI etiquette and reminds others of infringements.
: Thoughts on the works of ansi author
: 1 Soulfox's Jinling Twelve Hairpins x 7 1 16 13 1
: What a great and exquisite work. It makes people feel the infinite charm of ANSI. Personally, I like Li the most.
: Beautiful pictures drawn with lines. I like many of Soulfox’s works, especially this Jinling set.
: Twelve Hairpins impressed me deeply both in terms of the overall feeling and the presentation of details.
: 2 BOneFiveER x 7 2 5
: ............. omitted below
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A moment of silence for the victims of compatriots
A moment of silence for the victims of compatriots
Pray for our beautiful motherland
Pray for our beautiful motherland
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