发信人: linzhihuan (BigHuan|卡尔马克思), 信区: ANSI
标 题: 第一章作业点评 for Augo
发信站: 日月光华 (2008年12月04日22:25:51 星期四), 站内信件
首先大力赞扬~~作业质量太高了以至于大家都谦让觉得不够资格评,最终我们只好勉为
其难选了一个最没有资格的我来点评一下。。。
space页就很精美了^^四个汉字很可爱而且很匀称,基本上没什么可以挑的了(至少比我
写的好多了。。。)
关于ansi礼仪方面的内容,看法很好很全面~
稍微吹毛求疵一下,旁边的chapter one有些许难以辨认,做字体的话,美观当然必不可
少,但是易于辨认也是很重要的哦^^个人最喜欢的一套英文字体是司机大人的那个,太
牛了。。。没看过的筒子们可以去x-7-2-27里面朝拜=。=
狐core大人的作品太让人佩服了~飘那个作品的很多片段,其核心画面都是之前再版面上
出现过的,这个作品狐core本人也很看重,可以算作是他个人ansi生涯的总结吧。。。q
l那个系列。。。那句话也是在bj中产生的~可以看出,好的创意是多么重要。
我个人认为,狐core大人从最初画色块起家,积累了足够多的构图以及比例的经验,然
后开始进行线条尝试,最终走向复杂的线条组合,有机结合色块。这也是很多学习ansi
的人值得借鉴的练习方法:)
最后那个作品好赞啊~虽然很小,但是好可爱~
这个系列很有潜力啊,我觉得不妨多做几个,形成一个系列,于是就出现了新的“百变
的我”。。。囧。。。
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Sender: linzhihuan BigHuan Karl Marx, message area: ANSI
Title: Chapter 1 Homework Comments for Augo
Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua December 04, 2008 22:25:51 Thursday, site mail
First of all, I strongly praised the work. The quality of the work was so high that everyone felt that they were not qualified to comment. In the end, we had to reluctantly
It’s hard to choose the one who is the least qualified to comment on.
The space page is very beautiful^^ The four Chinese characters are very cute and well-proportioned. Basically there is nothing to choose from, at least better than me.
Much better writing
Regarding the etiquette aspects of ANSI, the views are very good and comprehensive.
Just to be picky, the chapter one next to it is a little hard to read. When making fonts, it is of course important to be beautiful.
It’s less but it’s also very important to be easy to read ^^ My favorite English font is the one for Driver. Too
It’s awesome. Those who haven’t seen it can go and worship inside x 7 2 27.
Mr. Fox Core’s work is so admirable. Many of the fragments of that work are the core images that have been reprinted before.
This work has appeared. Fox Core himself also values it very much. It can be regarded as a summary of his personal ansi career q
l That sentence in the series was also produced in bj. It can be seen how important good creativity is.
I personally think that Fox Core-sama has accumulated enough experience in composition and proportion since he first started painting color blocks.
Then I started experimenting with lines and eventually moved towards complex line combinations and organic combinations of color blocks. This is also a lot of learning from ANSI.
Practice methods worth learning from:
The last one is great. Although it is small, it is so cute.
This series has great potential. I thought I might as well make a few more to form a series, so a new variety appeared.
I'm embarrassed
ω ω momo..
ten ten
ナ大 ナ大 ㄧ の の の
ㄧ丶亅
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