发信人: asplant (植物人|水木社区), 信区: ANSI_Train02
标 题: Re: 1、一些台湾原住民1||吐槽点:这也叫画人物?
发信站: 日月光华 (2011年04月16日11:10:23 星期六), 站内信件
做这个作业绝对需要开三个term。。。
先题外话一句:那个达悟族的λ真是笑翻了啊!
整体感觉:
画面凌乱。我想原因可能是特殊字符用得过多,色彩也用得过多造成的
细节上:
两个mm托着腮的那只胳膊有点僵硬,腿太粗(不好意思我是腿控。。。。。。)第二个m
m的面部线
条过于繁杂,并且不连续。头饰的色彩对比太鲜明,有些喧宾夺主般的破坏了头部的轮廓
布衣族的gg在原图上看起来比较俊朗帅气,脸型比较方正,有一种纯朴的感觉,改成尖
脑袋就不太合适。用aa做眼睛感觉有种搞笑的意味,不太符合原图的感觉。衣服的线条
也不连续。
达悟族中间的几个特殊字符比较难看出来要表现的是手。那个表现衣服的二
好突出。。。第一眼看过去就是一个“二”字。。。然后λ再次笑翻。。
其实我觉得如果不把他们四个拼成一幅图,每个单独放着,看起来会舒服很多。
最后说:老师我终于了解了你的苦心。。。我深刻理解了为什么我的cn作求砖头都求不
来的原因。。。所以,老师偶太感谢你啦!!看到我的cn作竟然还能愿意收我为徒~~偶
感激涕零哇!
【 在 Castellio (percyshelley|Right to Heresy) 的大作中提到: 】
: 【 原文由 percyshelley 所发表 】
: 来不及等批评意见,已经用在述职报告上了。。
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: ╱ ╲ *☆*☆* aa \ /──\
: ジ| ***** |ミ ☆ ☆ /<_ D /───\
: * * *⺄ 丿 )╲ __/ /─⊕⊕─\
: ╰, ,╯ ッ>-ィ _/ _/╲ \︵ /─────\
: /(_)\|~ |/(_)\ ≮=═╪═ゆ_) ══════
: ╱{><>}` 阿 `│ │╲ 卑 ~\ ナ╱〢| / v╭ \
: .................(以下省略)
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※ 修改:·asplant 于 2011年04月16日11:12:00·[FROM: 70.94.99.*]
Sender: asplant plant person Shuimu Community, letter area: ANSI Train02
Title: Re: 1 Some Taiwanese aborigines 1 made complaints: Is this also called painting figures?
Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua Saturday, April 16, 2011 11:10:23, site mail
You definitely need to open three terms to do this assignment.
Let me digress first, that Lamb from the Tawu tribe really laughed out loud.
overall feeling
The picture is messy. I think the reason may be that too many special characters and too many colors are used.
in detail
The arms holding the cheeks of the two mms are a bit stiff and the legs are too thick. Sorry, I am a leg control. The second m
m facial line
The strips are too complicated and discontinuous. The color contrast of the headdress is too sharp, which destroys the outline of the head.
The GG of the common people looks more handsome and handsome in the original picture, with a square face and a simple feeling. Change it to sharp.
The head just doesn’t fit well. Using aa for the eyes feels kind of funny. It doesn’t quite match the feeling of the original picture and the lines of the clothes.
Not continuous either
The special characters among the Tawu tribe are difficult to see. The ones they represent are the hands and the second character represents the clothes.
It stands out. At first glance, it’s the word “two”, and then I burst out laughing again.
In fact, I think it would look much better if the four of them were put together into one picture and each one was placed separately.
Finally, I said, Teacher, I finally understand your hard work. I deeply understand why I can’t even get bricks for my cn work.
The reason for coming is so, thank you so much, teacher. After seeing my cn work, you are willing to accept me as your disciple.
I'm so grateful
In Castellio percyshelley Right to Heresy's masterpiece:
: Originally published by percyshelley
: There was no time to wait for the criticism, it was already used in the work report.
:
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: ジ ***** ミ < D
: * * *⺄丿
: , , ッ> ィ
: ゆ
: {><>} A bei ナ v
: ............. omitted below
Source: Sun Moon Guanghua bbs.fudan.edu.cn [FROM: 70.94.99.*]
Modified: asplant on April 16, 2011 11:12:00 [FROM: 70.94.99.*]