发信人: Castellio (percyshelley|Right to Heresy), 信区: ANSI_Train02
标 题: Re: 封禁crowyue在ANSI_Train02的发文权限
发信站: 日月光华 (2010年03月24日22:09:51 星期三), 站内信件
阿。。。原谅我措辞激烈一些 这是个很严重的问题 你的线条连接很不好
太琐碎了 看不出整体连贯性 建议你去描一描动漫的人物轮廓,你先不要去研究
虚连、特殊字符什么的,先加强自己线条的连贯性,一定要看得出来是什么
【 在 eeannie (...) 的大作中提到: 】
: 呜~~桑心,果然没看出来
: 其实是个人(一半)把一只脚插到了蜗牛壳里,蜗牛走不掉飙泪的样子。。。
: 【 在 Castellio (percyshelley|Right to Heresy) 的大作中提到: 】
: : 这是啥 只看出来蜗牛
: : btw momo~~
: : 【 在 eeannie (...) 的大作中提到: 】
: : .................(以下省略)
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Sender: Castellio percyshelley Right to Heresy, Area: ANSI Train02
Title: Re: Ban crowyue from posting on ANSI Train02
Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua Wednesday, March 24, 2010 22:09:51, site mail
Ah, forgive me for my harsh words. This is a very serious problem. Your line connections are not very good.
It’s too trivial and I can’t see the overall coherence. I suggest you trace the outlines of anime characters. Don’t study it yet.
Virtual connections, special characters, etc. First strengthen the coherence of your lines. Make sure you can see what they are.
In eeannie...'s masterpiece:
: Wow, Sang Xin, I really didn’t see it.
: Actually, half of a person stuck one foot into the snail shell and looked like the snail was crying because it couldn't escape.
: Mentioned in Castellio percyshelley Right to Heresy:
: : What is this? I can only see a snail.
: : btw momo
: : Mentioned in eeannie...'s masterpiece:
: : ............. omitted below
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