Sender: hizsy 0170 The scar is healed and the pain is forgotten, message area: ANSI Train02 Title: Re: lovely students Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua Monday, June 28, 2010 09:25:19, site mail 1. It only took two lines to express the image of "heart bridge", which is still very good. 2. ANSI is an art of omission, and the space for expression is limited. Therefore, it is more important to focus on the characteristics when painting. The characteristics are revealed. Pictures are easy to understand. Kieslowsky did this very well. You can browse the highlights section to learn, such as this one. Bridge, the bridge in the original picture is written with a typo. It may be that the wrong version was copied from the Internet. Make a habit of checking before pasting the picture. It's a good habit to repeat it. If you use the color block in the middle, the bridge hole will come out, and you can better see that it is a bridge. Seniors often added dark reflections to express the water surface. You can take a look at the highlights area x 12 4 special topics. 3. The drawing method of the heart is not perfect because there are obvious incoherences. I have seen some better spellings in a certain signature file. You can refer to them. 4. The expression of gender is a bit simple. In a picture with many objects, a single character is used to express an independent thing. The lack of connection and echo around it is not good for the overall sense. In the six-line space, you can try using stick figures. Or the avatar shows a man and a woman. This is often done in the signature files of many seniors. 5. I’ve been talking about details for a long time, but there’s nothing I can do about it. This is the end of my pig’s knuckle level. As for the composition, you can think about it again. The font arrangement is a bit random. I have always adopted the safest symmetrical composition method. Please ask an advanced composition teacher for further guidance. Modify example We keep forgetting to build a bridge and take a look deep into each other's hearts. Understand what each other needs most Mentioned in cindyy's masterpiece: : Change the layout : We keep forgetting to build a bridge : Take a look into the other person’s heart : : : : Understand what each other needs most : Mentioned in cindyy's masterpiece: : : It seems too crowded : ............. omitted below .... ...Single is not just unparalleled... ...... . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. ..... . ... .... ... .. ..... Tina gives Adan as a gift Source: Sun and Moon Guanghua bbs.fudan.edu.cn [FROM: 218.69.114.*] Modification: hizsy on June 28, 2010 09:27:28 [FROM: 218.69.114.*]