Sender: hizsy 0170 The scar is healed and the pain is forgotten, message area: ANSI Train02 Title: Re: lovely students Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua June 28, 2010 11:49:55 Monday, site mail 1. The shapes of the wooden horse's wings and clouds are well drawn. I especially like the wings. 2. You can refer to the following two for the wooden horse and draw it more carefully. As Teacher Shelley said, the symbol "任" is used well. In comparison to Ski The teacher is more like a cow XD Hey hey, assistant teacher ' Don’t you want to hang out? ヽ In addition, snow in the essence area Teacher Lai’s collection catalogue, x 7 1 17 48 14 5 > > > < There are more collections about horses by wut by SKI 3. In terms of composition, it should be arranged according to the position where it appears in the lyrics. The wooden horse is the core image. Should it be centered? Would it be better to put the clouds around the horse to better reflect the flying? @@ Add a little person right away. You’ve made the mistake of superfluous things again. Speaking of clouds, there is no need to add an extra line for the " " character. You can use other symbols instead. 4. In short, it’s great for a newbie. Keep up the good work and look forward to more and better works. Random tampering carousel 0 ⌒ but can No 任 < 乀 take you with me ヾ彡丿 wings ヽ ⌒ 巜 乀 ヽ fly everywhere ヽ こ In the masterpiece of lionet, the fluffy little lion mentioned: : Continue as a novice : : : ヾ 彡 : 任 乀 The merry-go-round has no wingsヽ :丿 :巜乀⌒ヽ : But it can take you everywhere ゛ fly ヽ こ : : ............. omitted below . . . ..:. :'. :.:. : . . Hand-drawn my heart . . ::. . . . . .. . . Gift from Ski Source: Sun and Moon Guanghua bbs.fudan.edu.cn [FROM: 218.69.114.*] Modification: hizsy on June 28, 2010 11:51:55 [FROM: 218.69.114.*]